faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks!

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2011/05/17 03:00:18 (permalink)

faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks!

put this together over a few days, have a listen if you can.. comments welcome, thank you.

http://www.soundclick.com...84&songID=10650483
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    radio
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/17 14:52:18 (permalink)

    I like where this is leading to but the drum track didn't do anything for me at all for this type of music .
    A nice heart pounding bass track would make more interesting , good WIP song project .

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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/17 17:52:59 (permalink)
    I can appreciate that.. these are only programmed drums on this track, not played on Vdrums or anything. You are right about WIP too, that it very much is.
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/17 18:33:44 (permalink)
    Well put together well done, although with a vocal or as radio said maybe even a bass hook, you would lose interest relatively quick. Anyone your production sounds more upfront and punchier than mine!



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    Sean*O
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/17 21:48:29 (permalink)
    Much like most of my stuff, it needs vocals for sure. I kind of write these things with the intent that vocals can be added so I try not to lay down too many things. Some of my older stuff is like that.. real thick and not the most accommodating for a vocal track, so I have been trying to do more 'vocal friendly' stuff rather than straight instrumentals.

    Thanks for the advice guys!
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    thepogue
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/17 22:24:12 (permalink)
    I thought it rocked!!! wow..loved it...

    kinda had a weezer punch!>..i really dug it!!
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/18 00:42:03 (permalink)
    Thanks thepouge.. must be that Mesa Recto tone and the Baritone guitar lending that quality you heard. :-)

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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/18 00:54:07 (permalink)
    This is a skip, Plus, Minus, Xtra add points, Send Minus Points to ahem, Plus points, minus.............

    Your intro.  just takes away from the afterward "COMMERCIAL PLAYER" that you are. And I am sure you are aware of it. Wanna pick on me? Let's play, send me an email and show me what ya got.

    I'm just messing with ya, this was AWESOME!!!!!!!!



    post edited by Serious Noize! - 2011/05/18 01:00:04

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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/18 03:49:59 (permalink)
    really nice full, thick guitar tone, but still reveals the chord's subtleties...good skill! yes, now needs some melody to take it to the next level, but i like it! drums work fine. be good to see where it goes next...

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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/18 23:25:17 (permalink)
    You funny guy you noize ;-) Thanks! Thanks to you also mgh, I appreciate you guys all taking the time to listen.


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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/19 02:02:05 (permalink)
    Sean*O


    You funny guy you noize ;-) Thanks! Thanks to you also mgh, I appreciate you guys all taking the time to listen.


    Thanks, and sorry because you don't know me and I should have better explained my joking. I apologize.

    This sounds great IMO!!! I like the groove of this one. Sound better than anything I've tried in the genre.

    Keep on rocking!!!!

    Excellent!!!!



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    Sean*O
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/19 20:42:18 (permalink)
    No worries friend, I got the humor right from the start.  :-) Thanks for the complements!
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/19 22:35:58 (permalink)
    Very nice. Well layed out and produced. Have you thought about changing it up to have a mellow section even for a short 4 bars worth?

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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/20 00:24:33 (permalink)
    Hi Tap, yes I had.. in fact that's typically more my style to mix it up like that. This time around I just wanted to make a straight simple rocker so I actually had to make a point not to throw some mellow bars.
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/20 03:16:54 (permalink)
    Hey, Sean,

    You've got a very cool metal fest going on here!

    Nice thick layered guitar tone and great playing, with some really nice changeups thrown in that keep it really interesting.

    Good stuff, man!
    Bob
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/05/22 02:48:07 (permalink)
    Thanks Bob, good to see you still at it too! :-)
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    Re:faster heavier song - comments welcome, thanks! 2011/06/06 02:17:51 (permalink)
    I want to thank the people who gave me their input and critiques. I put together a slightly different mix based on some of the advice I received and I think it's the better for it. Original link has been updated with new mix in case anyone is curious about the results.

    Thank you!
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