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2011/08/19 19:54:07 (permalink)

Another tune!

Here is one i have been working on for about two weeks, it is almost done. I have more touch up to do on the vocals, and some more mixing. Any thoughts?    http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10971255&q=hi&newref=1
post edited by Robomusic - 2011/08/20 02:14:02

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    Basradaem
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    Re:Another tune! 2011/08/21 00:00:36 (permalink)
    Awesome work, Rob.  The mix is balanced very well and overall production quality is top notch.  I enjoyed this tune!  Great guitar work too.

    What do you plan to do with the vox yet?  I think they're really good. 

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    Robomusic
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    Re:Another tune! 2011/08/21 01:35:29 (permalink)
    Basically a little work on a few of the notes that tend to head flat, and i would love to add a background vocal track. Also i plan to lose the organ on the verses and have it kick in an support the chorus drums a little bit more. Thanks Luke for the listen.

    Takin' a listen over at your site as i type.

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    Re:Another tune! 2011/08/22 14:13:00 (permalink)
    Hi Rob,

    I'm listening on a laptop but the mix and production sound very good.

    Great guitar playing/tone.

    You've got a good voice, too.

    Nice work!

    -gr

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    Re:Another tune! 2011/08/22 14:27:24 (permalink)
    Ah, I think the voice is too loud, and the drums reflect that also, while the main music (instruments) are too soft. Piano is almost loud enough, but that is how I hear it anyway.




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    Re:Another tune! 2011/08/22 20:20:35 (permalink)
    Bob,
      Nice sounding tune.  I actually think the organ should stay (in the verses) but come forward in the mix a bit.  Other than that I think mix sounds pretty good.  Nice performances all the way round.  Good stuff!

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    Re:Another tune! 2011/08/22 21:01:36 (permalink)
    Nice soundscape. Everything seems to be where it should with the exception of the vocals. Sounds like you're holding back a bit on the vocals, apprehension is the enemy of good vocal takes. Just let it rip and try to connect with the lyrics/message/vibe of the tune. It's all about conveying the emotion of the song. Vocals are tough though. Good work.

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    Re:Another tune! 2011/08/22 21:15:23 (permalink)
    Hey.... you've come out of retirement! 

    I like where this is headed..... have another look at the line 7 grand children..... might need a rewrite. It's awkward.

    So far it sounds good.... of course it needs kick and punch in the bottom end.

    That guitar tone is soooooo FAAAAAATTTTTTT! I love it.

    I never knew....or had forgotten that you are such a talented guitar player.

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