Another short one (2:11)

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2011/10/18 10:31:44 (permalink)

Another short one (2:11)

 
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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/18 13:34:27 (permalink)
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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/18 21:04:02 (permalink)
    Have the aliens landed?

    Sorry about the humor but that's my first impression.

    Actually, this is interesting. Keeping it short though helps. Any longer could make it monotonous IMO.

    The levels are uneven. All the differnt parts sound good but the main instrument is too loud. I hear this as a transitional piece and should range from a mezzo piano to mezzo forte.

    I like it.
    Well done!

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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/19 07:11:51 (permalink)
    Cool! I agree with GP. Aliens was the first thing that came to my mind also.

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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/19 08:40:40 (permalink)
    Hi Robert,
     
    Thanks for taking the time to listen and thank you for your comments.
     
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    Have the aliens landed?

    Sorry about the humor but that's my first impression.

    Actually, this is interesting. Keeping it short though helps. Any longer could make it monotonous IMO.

    The levels are uneven. All the differnt parts sound good but the main instrument is too loud. I hear this as a transitional piece and should range from a mezzo piano to mezzo forte.

    I like it.
    Well done!



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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/19 08:43:23 (permalink)
    Hi Scott,
     
    Thanks for taking the time to listen and thanks for your comments.
     
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    Cool! I agree with GP. Aliens was the first thing that came to my mind also.



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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/19 10:06:23 (permalink)
    The originality is wonderful.

    The piece seems too perfect (I don't think 'too perfect' can actually be used but the meaning is understood).

    The velocities and durations are identical, at least that is what i perceive.  Maybe this is what you are after in the piece.

    I would like to hear some variation in the durations, velocities and some legato between notes that sound as if they are swinging.

    Just my humble opinion.

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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/19 11:04:05 (permalink)
    Hi Bob, this brings a smile to my face after a grim day at work, thank you very much : ).

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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/19 15:20:55 (permalink)
    Hi Lance,
     
    Thanks for taking the time to listen and thank you for your commiens.
     
    Regards,
     
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    The originality is wonderful.

    The piece seems too perfect (I don't think 'too perfect' can actually be used but the meaning is understood).

    The velocities and durations are identical, at least that is what i perceive.  Maybe this is what you are after in the piece.

    I would like to hear some variation in the durations, velocities and some legato between notes that sound as if they are swinging.

    Just my humble opinion.

    Regards,
    Lance



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    Re:Another short one (2:11) 2011/10/19 15:22:50 (permalink)
    Hi Rik,
     
    Thanks for taking the time to listen and thank you for your comments.
     
    Regards,
     
    GT
     
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    Hi Bob, this brings a smile to my face after a grim day at work, thank you very much : ).

    Rik



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