With Me - New song

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2011/11/20 00:08:25 (permalink)

With Me - New song

Here is my latests song in a rough draft format. Working on mixing, hoping to add some pads and other instruments to fill it in a bit. Input appreciated.
 
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With peace and light . . .
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    radio
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    Re:With Me - New song 2011/11/20 00:48:37 (permalink)

    Sorry Jason something isn't working , it started then suddenly stopped .
    Check back later, cheers !

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    Re:With Me - New song 2011/11/20 07:25:11 (permalink)
    Terrific tune. Love the lyrics - they're sentimental without being sappy. The guitar parts are nice, finger picking works well. The instrumentation is pretty sparse but it still  supports the song. Vocals are good as well - maybe just a little "pitchy" in places (but that could be my ears). I think it will serve you well to flesh this out a bit and remix. The song is really solid and that is what matters most (as far as I am concerned) - work on the mix. Good stuff!

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    Re:With Me - New song 2011/11/20 08:15:14 (permalink)
    Very pretty Jason. I really like the guitar work.
    Nice melodies and lyrics.

    I think the harmonies could be backed off a little and cut the lows out of them. There's too much in the low mids with both the lead and the harmony together.

    Too much effect on everything for my ears.

    The thumping on the guitar is a little disruptive. 

    not sure if done intentionaly but, It appears like the first verse has a whole nother energy (vibe) to it than the rest of the song (your attitude gets stronger as the song progresses). So, I would beef up (redo) the first verse.

    It seems like this is 2 songs in 1. 'With Me' and 'For you'

    All that said, I enjoyed up to around 3:50 or so as it started to meander and get lost.

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    Re:With Me - New song 2011/11/20 09:31:47 (permalink)
    + + + 1 song ----- lose the guitar thump
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