Death is waiting

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Filthe
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2011/11/27 15:21:19 (permalink)

Death is waiting

Hello,
I want show (If i may :p) my first componist song - Death is waiting.I made this song on the Korg M50,cakewalk and GP.I am 16 years old and i havent got experiences,but i would like to hear opinion.  

Song contains suffering,hope remains.
Thank you...:) 


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UsNin0v2Tu0&feature=related

post edited by Filthe - 2011/11/27 15:25:06
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    SteveStrummerUK
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    Re:Death is waiting 2011/11/27 15:38:17 (permalink)
     
    Welcome aboard Patrik!
     
    Wow, for a first song, and considering you composed it yourself, this is excellent.
     
    And only 16 - you have some serious talent there young man, and without doubt, a wonderful musical future ahead of you.
     
    My very best wishes.
     
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    Re:Death is waiting 2011/11/27 16:41:25 (permalink)
    This is pretty good. There is definitly some talent there. There is good structure going on. There should be more depth/thickness to each section as you go. You'll get there though. Just keep writing.

    You could try rolls on the tympanis. Counter melodies during the melodies would add more depth and thickness to what's already there. The music sure matches the theme very well.

    Very well done!

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    Filthe
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    Re:Death is waiting 2011/11/28 11:57:27 (permalink)
    Thank you ! I am very happy,because i dont know,what i may think about my song..How i wrote..I havent got experiences and your praise is very pleasant for me.


    Thank you ! :-) 
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