drma173
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Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
* 808 Drums pattern *strings distorted *Rap and Singing VOX *Electric Distorted Lead guitar solo BY "Bobby" Produced on Sonar 6 Rewired FL Studio By me, And my good friend "Bobby" http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11298230
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congalocke
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/18 00:29:13
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I have to say..."It's so unbelievable!" Couldn't resist;-) I don't listen to this type of music but I liked it's ethereal quality with the pads and delays etc. I felt I wanted to hear more of your voice but the pitch technique got in the way. Solo was nice and I like the use of delay on it. My criticisms may just be issues of taste...I appreciate your efforts and wish you the best in your endeavors! eric P.S. I also wanted to say that I would have like to have heard something dynamic (such as background vocals coming in under certain passages of your singing) to give a little more dimension to the song. Things that come in and go out to help build and release tension. I hope something of this might be helpful...
post edited by congalocke - 2011/12/18 00:36:07
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congalocke
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/18 01:16:29
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BTW, Couldn't get your "MySpace" address to work...You still have an account there?
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jamesg1213
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/18 06:48:57
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Best I've heard from you, really full sound, nice and moody, and the guitar works well.
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drma173
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/18 14:25:49
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Best I've heard from you, really full sound, nice and moody, and the guitar works well.
Hey glad you like it
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/18 15:34:25
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Cool,something contempory to listen to on this forum.
I dug it, like the t-pain vocal effect. The guitar solo was nice touch.and the beats sound great.
For improvement, those pads are too loud when you vox comes in and on the guitar solo, eq cut could be useful too. You need some other kind of vocal to come in wether its doubling up on some certain words, harmony or oohs and aahs to keep interest.
Keep it up bro,
Cian
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/18 23:18:57
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Hi Tony. This sounds really good. Bobby's guitar solo comes in at the perfect time and adds a nice dramatic touch to this song. Some eq to smooth out the tone on the lead mabye but it really works dynamite here. Nice synth choices throughout and it all gels very well with the vox. Very enjoyable.
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drma173
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/19 14:07:21
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rhynosynth
Hi Tony. This sounds really good. Bobby's guitar solo comes in at the perfect time and adds a nice dramatic touch to this song. Some eq to smooth out the tone on the lead mabye but it really works dynamite here. Nice synth choices throughout and it all gels very well with the vox. Very enjoyable.
Hey thanks glad you enjoyed it...
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/19 17:56:06
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I like this song, and it has great potential. The instruments are well played and well mixed. My only issue is the lead vocal. It's well sung, but the delay gets in the way at times, and it obscures the lyrics. Also, the "auto-tune" thing is getting a little long in the tooth. It is starting to sound like a cliche that is all too common in certain musical styles. But, it's just a matter of taste, like salt vs. pepper. I would personally like to hear you stretch your imagination and come up with something more original that you can call your own. All in all, a good effort.
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/19 18:00:49
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WHOO HOO!!! YES! I like this very much! Bobby all the work has paid off. Kudos to you guys!!!
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/20 01:38:49
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 Hey guys I liked this song , Bobby where is Bobby my buddy he was great as always . His guitar playing worked perfectly with this music , I did think his guitar playing should had been just alittle more up front but over all its a WINNER with me ! Happy Holidays to both of you ! Radio
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/23 17:29:58
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Hey guys I liked this song , Bobby where is Bobby my buddy he was great as always . His guitar playing worked perfectly with this music , I did think his guitar playing should had been just alittle more up front but over all its a WINNER with me !
Happy Holidays to both of you ! Radio
Hey thanks for your tips
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drma173
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Re:Hey guys I just did this song please comment your thoughts
2011/12/28 00:20:16
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