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tredf69
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2011/12/31 16:45:29 (permalink)

new songs music for evaluation

hello every1 as a beginning songwritter and singer i am trying to find advice on ways improve my music; my music created by cake walk 6.0 is on MREDFEARN1@youtube.come on the video link and terryredfearn@reverbnation.com; i know especialy at middel age my singing will have a little but of time to improve on voice so if you see something on music you think i could change a little better please give your opinion in a polite way thanks every1 have a great new year thanks terry redfearn
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    Purple Rhapsody
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    Re:new songs music for evaluation 2011/12/31 17:14:12 (permalink)
    Your links are to email addresses.... perhaps for the reverbnation link you meant http://reverbnation.com/terryredfearn

    I cannot comment on the music except to say that the vocals are drowning out everything else so its hard to hear it as a whole - or at least that was the case on the first track I listened to. If you reduce the comparative volume of the vocals then I'll come back to give a more constructive comment.

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    Re:new songs music for evaluation 2012/01/01 14:07:02 (permalink)
    This might be the scariest gospel song I've ever heard. I'm not so sure I want to be saved anymore, and that's the politest thing I can think to say. I would suggest that you remove the distortion from your vocal, or lay it on thicker. I'm not sure where you're headed with this, but I am curious to hear what others think of this. This could very well be a masterpiece, and I may not be ready for it, yet. Good luck.

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    Lynn

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    amateur
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    Re:new songs music for evaluation 2012/01/01 15:55:29 (permalink)
    I find the vocals too loud and there is also a lot of background noise.  Maybe back off on the volume on the vocals initially, then we can hear the song properly.
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    Re:new songs music for evaluation 2012/01/01 16:00:21 (permalink)
    Politely Terry, your vocals don't fit the backing tracks, either in a harmonic or timing sense, and the music is virtually buried under the distorted vocal tracks.

    The only suggestion I can give is to turn yourself down, listen to the music carefully and try to construct melodies that work with it, then blend your voice to suit. As it is, these tracks are unlistenable.

     
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