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2012/01/28 20:25:53 (permalink)

What do You Think ?

I know the timming is off a bit but, Do you have any suggestions on rounding this out ?
 
 
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    darylcrowley
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    Re:What do You Think ? 2012/01/28 21:06:00 (permalink)
    I don't know what the heck this is, but it's kind of cool.  There are the timing issues.  Maybe some synth playing a lead track.  It sounds like a backing track, so it's seems long because it needs something up front to focus on.  Cool beat.

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    Re:What do You Think ? 2012/01/29 09:46:03 (permalink)
    I like the sound textures that you get with this tune.  It  does sound cool, but as Daryl said, it needs something else to focus one's attention on.  The  timing issues are slight and could almost be taken as counterpoint.  Something  riffing over the top of this would be nice.  The production has depth so you're close to getting it right.  If you decide to let it stand, I would shorten it a bit, and it could lead into something entirely different.

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    Re:What do You Think ? MIXED DOWN A BIT ! (REMIX) 2012/01/30 23:42:08 (permalink)
    I Tweeked it a bit, what do You Think?
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    Re:What do You Think ? MIXED DOWN A BIT ! (REMIX) 2012/01/30 23:43:38 (permalink)
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    I Tweeked it a bit, what do You Think?

    ( I forgot to put the new LINK! )
     
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    Re:What do You Think ? MIXED DOWN A BIT ! (REMIX) 2012/01/31 09:51:17 (permalink)
    I liked this better the second time around.  It pulls my mind in several different directions at once.  You have the point-counterpoint thing going that give this tune something for the listener to grab onto.  I do like the textures that you have blended together, and they're mixed well.  By George, I think you've got it.

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    Re:What do You Think ? MIXED DOWN A BIT ! (REMIX) 2012/01/31 10:45:44 (permalink)
    That is sooooo coool.

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