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This tune has a nice, trance inducing quality.  The parts were played and mixed well, and the title is an apt name for this song.  You could use this as a starting point for something more, or it could stand on its own.  All in all, good effort.

Hi Eric - Overall it is a great piece of music. Held my attention throughout and definitely fits the title. I only have a few very minor suggestions. The lead is a bit far back in the mix and could come forward a bit, particularly at the beginning, to accentuate it more. Might be worth trying slightly different reverb settings to increase the dream-like, ethereal quality of the music, particularly on the lead. The only other very minor point is that on my speakers, the mix seemed rather one sided - perhaps people with better speakers than mine (and better ears!) could help more on this, but it might be worth having a look at the panning for each instrument to widen the mix. But as I said, I love this piece of music - great work.

thanks for listening Paulo your mixes sound great on your songs hope to get there myself  eric

This adjustment has a very good trance induction quality. Part, were played, and mix well, the title is a fitting name for this song. You can also use a starting point for something more, or it can stand on their own. All in all, a good effort.I'm always a sucker for stuff like that - sounds great! I listened several times.