Re:Keep The Motor Running - Remix
2012/02/02 02:09:00
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Lynn,
I really liked this. It's a good Southern Rocker.
Is that a Strat I hear in my right ear?
Now the crits, which are very small and maybe only matter to me, but when I hear a good rocker the vocal need to be relaxed.
What I mean by relaxed is I think it's ok to not use proper english. Like "keep your motor running",
I think it would come off much better to use "keep your motor runin' ". And the same when the lyric is " I'll be coming for you" You didn't say I will be coming for you, I just think a more relaxed "I'll be comin' for you" would sound so much better for you. Like I said , small crit and maybe only matters to me. In the end it is your song to sing. Rock should be in my mind relaxed. Still liked the song .
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