just started work in progress

I'm not quite sure what you're looking for here.  You're off to a good start, and if you want phat then you might try adding a bass line and punching up the bass drum via compression or a different sound.  As it is now, the analog synth seems a little stiff to me, but a good, solid bass line could smooth that out.  Depending where you want to go with this, another instrument on top could give this some depth and make it sound less two dimensional.  My conclusion is you're very close.  Keep playing with it and you'll find what you're looking for.