A Lifetime of Sorrow - my latest track

This has so much possibility.  I'm glad to hear that you think it's a work in progress because you can go in so many directions.  As it is now, there's not many changes in the arrangement to give it dynamic tension.  I can hear how a bridge or chorus progression could easily fit in to give the listener a change up once in a while.  It's kinda hard to make judgements on chord progressions with only a drum part, but if you intend for it to be RnB, it needs a vocal.  It doesn't yet have the big beat to be a rap song.  At the very least, it could use a lead instrument to give us an idea of a melody line, if you intend to have one.  As I said, it has potential, but right now, it's like a fresh canvass with a few splashes of paint.  Give us more to go on.