drma173
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Can someone give me some advice?
For the next person who view this post thanks for looking into it I just DELETED the original link Again thanks..... If you want to listen some of my tunes & give me some opinions you can go to this link-> Tony Jay
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jamesyoyo
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 07:49:51
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The vocal beat is off with the flow of the backing track...hence the odd thing you are hearing.
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whack
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 10:30:22
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I agree with James and I also think the piano is a little off too. Mind you the vocal start to fit a little better as the track goes on. The actual song itself is OK and with some more work could be enjoyable. Cian
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Mooch4056
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 11:16:02
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jamesyoyo
The vocal beat is off with the flow of the backing track...hence the odd thing you are hearing.
ya - everything is out of time and please post songs only in English and learn to sing way better I winced on the first note
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Lynn
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 11:36:21
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For one, the voice is too loud compared to the rest of the mix. There are some timing issues, and it could be sung better. Perhaps if you practice singing and playing at the same time, you can get the feel translated better. It just sounds disjointed right now. Lastly, ignore the comment about posting song in English. Some of us do know Spanish, and it really has little to do with the song unless you want us to analyze the lyrics. Most of us can tell if a performance is good in any language. Stay at it.
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Mooch4056
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 11:39:42
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Some of us do know Spanish, and it really has little to do with the song unless you want us to analyze the lyrics.
I want to hear it in english Who cares if some people know spanish - this is america and we speak english - get out of my country if you dont like it blah blah blah blah hey drman - dont listen to Lynn - like she would know (eye roll) her and her "space cat" sheeeesh !!!
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Lynn
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 12:17:18
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All of us that don't speak a native American language should leave right now. ;) And she is a he. lol Just a suggestion, buy the Rosetta Stone.
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Mooch4056
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 12:51:27
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Lynn
All of us that don't speak a native American language should leave right now. ;) And she is a he. lol Just a suggestion, buy the Rosetta Stone.
your so mixed up in the language you have a girl name and a gay space cat avator
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Lynn
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/28 13:15:28
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I love it! Mooch4056
Lynn
All of us that don't speak a native American language should leave right now. ;) And she is a he. lol Just a suggestion, buy the Rosetta Stone.
your so mixed up in the language you have a girl name and a gay space cat avator
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Bob Oister
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/02/29 03:50:47
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Hi, You've got a very good start here, and the synths and piano sound great! As James, Cian and Lynn mentioned above, if you lower the vocals a few notches, and touch up the vocal timing to match the rhythm, I think you'll be on the right track to a very cool song. Have a great day!  Bob
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drma173
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Re:Can someone give me some advice?
2012/03/01 23:37:52
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HELLO EVERY ONE THANKS for the posts I appreciated it. Unfortunately
Im going to vito this project Im going in a different route.
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