Long Run (work-in-progress) Attention Attention!!! very loud mix

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Boomin36Beatz
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2012/03/16 21:42:19 (permalink)

Long Run (work-in-progress) Attention Attention!!! very loud mix

this is one of my incomplete beats.
what does it sound like??? (mixing eg'ing etc etc).
and what about the melody???
should i add some more elements or start structuring???


http://soundcloud.com/boomin36beatz/long-run

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    Lynn
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    Re:Long Run (work-in-progress) Attention Attention!!! very loud mix 2012/03/17 11:12:59 (permalink)
    What we have here is a measure of music repeated over and over.  What does it sound like?  Well, the bass drum is booming, and the synth is playing a backing riff to an Am-G progression.  It all sounds OK as far as mix and EQ go. " What about the melody?",  what melody?  Before you can get an answer, you have to provide a melody.  The synth isn't playing a melody, as I said, it's just a riff.  Should you add more elements or start structuring?  Yes to both questions.  One measure does not make a song.  Even people dancing the night away in a club expect more than this from their dance music.  If you're going to use the moniker Boomin36Beatz, I would hope to hear some beats that are fresh and interesting, this isn't one of them.  I mean no disrespect, and I wish you well.  I'd like to hear a full song from you.

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    Re:Long Run (work-in-progress) Attention Attention!!! very loud mix 2012/03/17 20:27:35 (permalink)
    not there anymore..... must be back to the wood shed based on what Lynn said.... 

    Full songs are good.... make it interesting. Something people are excited about. 

    And LOUD is not the goal.... they have volume controls for that.

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    Re:Long Run (work-in-progress) Attention Attention!!! very loud mix 2012/03/18 03:49:49 (permalink)
    first of all thanx for feedback. :-)

    @Lynn
    i have never said that its completed.
    i wasn't sure about this one.
    because of the riff (melody) was kinda boring for me too.
    the last two posts here were not my best.
    simpleone and long run were made by me on
    an old netbookk(singlecore 1,66 ghz)
    so you see.
    after 60 midi lanes ,audio and vst/i
    my small friend (netbook) doesn't let me do anything.
    your point of your view is right. (Full length)

    but like said i wasn't sure if i should making it longer or not.


    @Guitarhacker
    volume control :-)
    no it should be somehting dramatic and not a loudness war piece.
    but it was really loud for me.

    so i thought a lill warning for your ears wouldnt be that bad.

    once again THANX for taking time
    reading,listening and leaving a message.

    Peace!!!




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    Lynn
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    Re:Long Run (work-in-progress) Attention Attention!!! very loud mix 2012/03/18 11:55:20 (permalink)
    I appreciate your reply.  Sometimes a simple riff can turn into something entirely unexpected if you go the distance.  I realize I was commenting on a segment of music, and I encourage you to stay with this.  I do understand when you've reached the limits of your computer, though, because I've been there.  But, after hearing of 60 some tracks, perhaps it's time to hone your engineering skills and see if you can do more with less.  When I get to a point where I'm unsure about the quality of a project, I go ahead and finish it and move on to the next song.  It's definitely harder to finish a song than to start one.  Getting a short piece of music is like handing a bone to an anthropologist and asking what will this person/animal look like?  Most of all, don't give up and don't be discouraged.  I look forward to hearing more from you.
    Boomin36Beatz


    first of all thanx for feedback. :-)

    @Lynn
    i have never said that its completed.
    i wasn't sure about this one.
    because of the riff (melody) was kinda boring for me too.
    the last two posts here were not my best.
    simpleone and long run were made by me on
    an old netbookk(singlecore 1,66 ghz)
    so you see.
    after 60 midi lanes ,audio and vst/i
    my small friend (netbook) doesn't let me do anything.
    your point of your view is right. (Full length)

    but like said i wasn't sure if i should making it longer or not.


    @Guitarhacker
    volume control :-)
    no it should be somehting dramatic and not a loudness war piece.
    but it was really loud for me.

    so i thought a lill warning for your ears wouldnt be that bad.

    once again THANX for taking time
    reading,listening and leaving a message.

    Peace!!!



    All the best,
    Lynn

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    www.soundclick.com/lynnwilson

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    Boomin36Beatz
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    Re:Long Run (work-in-progress) Attention Attention!!! very loud mix 2012/03/18 15:55:29 (permalink)
    Thanx :-)

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