Some electronic music ... Arctic Journey

Any suggestions how to improve this greatly appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/stable-records/arctic-journey-part-iii

I agree 100%.  There's much potential just under the surface.  The mix is OK, but it just doesn't grab me.  This sounds more like a warm up exercise than a fully realized song.  I would like to hear this fleshed out some more, but I appreciate your effort.

whack


Cool, would of liked a strong melody line with a lead synth at round 0:56 after the build up and a few more vocals near the second half.

Good groove and some really great sounds in it.

Cian

Thanks to you all for the replies, really appreciated.   This is a new musical style for me, and I must admit I concentrated more on mix than on the content.   I noted the comment re the kick, and now I tweaked that in the mix.   Other creative ideas noted, I will bring into my next song.