"The Daily News"

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2012/04/15 13:38:47 (permalink)

"The Daily News"

 
Here's another song from my upcoming CD project.
 
The song is "The Daily News" and every line in the verses came from a 15 minute news cycle of a "Major" news outlet.
I didn't change a word.
I couldn't make this stuff up....
 
The Daily News
 
Hope you like it and thanks for listening and any comments/critiques.

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    Lynn
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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/16 11:39:19 (permalink)
    I love the lyrics to this.  Even if you ripped them from the headlines, it still takes skill to put them together artistically.  Overall, the mix seems a little over compressed, but the performances are terrific.  Nicely done.

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/16 13:26:19 (permalink)

    Thanks Lynn, much appreciated.
    I think the vocals in particular are over compressed, I really need to fix that. I may end up having to redo the bass part, I had to squash the heck out of it to get the tone I wanted and to get it to fit in the mix.
    Thanks again!

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/17 08:08:38 (permalink)

    Tough crowd.

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/17 15:42:04 (permalink)
    Song kinda grows on you. I like the offbeat dissonant Bowie like vocals and chorus.

    The mix is pretty good for the most part. 

    This is up for debate, and a personal feeling, so take it with a grain of salt: my only criticism is I am not a fan of the vibrato in most of the vocals. Vibrato can make or break a song, and in this case, its close to breaking it. I would prefer more even vocals in the verse.

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 08:57:06 (permalink)

    Thanks for the listen and the comments Shad.
    It's funny, I've always felt the same as you about vibrato in vocals, particularly in my own. I guess I really haven't paid enough attention to the vox in this song because I never really noticed and vibrato in it. I'll have to give it aanother look with that in mind.
    Thanks again!

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 10:00:36 (permalink)
    Yes, it definitely is a Mad, Mad World and you have captured that perfectly. It's a great song and first class production.

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 10:50:51 (permalink)
    Did you post this here before ? I definitely remember something very much like it as I thought it was a great idea for a lyric.
    I guess if you didn't then someone else beat you to it.  Still like it though.
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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 12:03:01 (permalink)

    Thanks very much Malcolmb! Yeah, gettin' crazier by the day. Like I saud in the description, you can't make stuff like that up, people would ask you what the heck you were smokin'.
    Appreciate it !

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 12:05:10 (permalink)

    Hey Paulo, thanks, glad you liked it.
    I don't think I've never posted it here before, but the demo was on some other sites. I try not to put stuff here unless it's close to being finished (or as close as I can get, LOL)
    Thanks again!

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 12:53:00 (permalink)
    I like it a lot - agree with you on the bass part though
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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 17:52:53 (permalink)

    Thanks Daryl! I'm starting work on the bass redo tonight, hopefully I can have it done by this weekend. Like a lot of us, real life gets in my way a lot, especially this time of year.
    Appreciate the listen and the kind words!

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 19:20:31 (permalink)
    Hey Bob. Really cool idea with the headlines etc. You really put it all together nicely.
    My only nit would be the snare sound just was starting to grate on me. Maybe try some more creative stuff like that sound on 2 and 4 and 2 other sounds on 1 and 3. idunno. Just guessing here. Like the tune muchly.

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/18 23:38:41 (permalink)
    Sounds overly compressed to me.

    The bass sounds rubbery to me.

    I wished the verse melody sounded more European.

    I liked the chorus.

    Guitar solo tone is killer.
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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/19 01:12:01 (permalink)

    Yea Bowie is the sound I get from this tune of yours , great lyrics , great sound , great lead guitar playing along with great vocals make this tune a hit with me !

    This one caught me by surprise , yes it does grow on you . Great job creating this song , I enjoyed it !

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    Re:"The Daily News" 2012/04/21 03:47:17 (permalink)
    Great song, love it. As soo as it started I thought wow, Steve Vai guesting how cool is that. Then I nearly fell off my chair when David Bowie started singing. They are all compliments BTW.

    I thought mix wise the bass was a little low on my system but seeing as everyone always says there's too much in mine I think that's more likely a problem with my system rather than your mix.

    Great concept for a song as well, very clever.
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