Marina

I wrote this for my date :))))))
 
K
Do the strings sounds synthed and phased to you ? How do I get rid of that ?
The track is called Marina,thks !
 

 A nice song fitting for a date. I didn't pick up on the strings sounding strange.

Starise


 A nice song fitting for a date. I didn't pick up on the strings sounding strange.

thank u.Sometimes I worried it was too sad sounding,but maybe its quite balanced really,hopefully :))
Thks for listening !
K
 

evadianepug


I'll bet she was impressed!  How did the date go?  Nicely done orchestration.   I had a hard time understanding it because it was in French!  :-)  Oh, I didn't hear any strange phasing if that's what you're asking.

She said she liked it :) We're meeting up later in the month I think ! Mais vous ne comprenez pas Francais ? :))) Ah good the strings sounds ok,thks for listening !
K
 

Lynn


This is a very haunting piece.  The orchestration was very well done, and the blending of textures works quite well.  I like the way the melody kept modulating throughout the piece which kept it interesting for me.  I heard no phasing issues, but I would have liked to hear the harp sample one octave higher, though, that's not very critical.  I can't wait to hear what you write for your next date.

Hi Lynn
Oh u thought it was haunting ?! I didnt hear this or feel it,but ok,we all hear differant things in music :) I'm glad u liked the piece,and liked the developement of the melody.Sometimes I try to find new ideas every step of the way and with this piece I thought I would try harder to use existing material,even if it was a simple placing the melody an octave higher at the end :) Its a good way,and I want to write more like this :))) I'll keep u posted with any new tunes I write,I feel very inspired at the minute,a little up in the clouds :) Its not a bad way at all !!!! Thank u for listening and your crit. I presume for the harp u r talking about the introduction ? Its true,its a little low,but I wanted the violin to project the highs when it first comes in.But yes,I understand what u mean,and thank u for taking time to listen and comment !
Kev
 

This sounds very pleasant, thanks for sharing.

nice job kev...not my cup o tea...but very well done!

Wookiee


This sounds very pleasant, thanks for sharing.

thank u for listeing !!

So did you get some? Beautiful. Intro needs work, but the rest is wonderful.

foxwolfen


So did you get some? Beautiful. Intro needs work, but the rest is wonderful.

Get some ? Whatever do u mean ? hehehe ?!!! Well I think she likes it when I write for her,so I'm going to continue :))))))))) Yep the intro is sparse,maybe it does need some extra work to hold the interest.Glad u liked the piece !!!
Kev
 

This is awesome. 

timidi


This is awesome. 

cheers dude !!!