Christian rock / pop

Like the song. Interesting reverb, can't decide whether i think it is too much or i love it. Nothing wrong with the car test either, has stood me in good stead too.

not bad,got some great hooks in this song and your guitar tone sounds absolutely fabulous but unfortunetly theres alot more that could be done.

the drums sound like a machine,there is alot more you can do to make them sound real,compression and reverb,exc,
the kick and snare also just disapeared at 3:25 for one bar.

i really liked the harmonies(the climbs)
but too much reverb is drowing the vocal in effects.

the reverb should be set to a wet setting during the climb harmonies not the whole vocal track,you see what i mean?
the part in the end of the verses-your moving,your moving,all AROUND>>
the part around around should be the wet the verses dryer.
this will enhance the "around" and push it right into the listeners ear canal like a wonderful sensation and make it appear louder but yet keep the balance of the mix.
a touch of delay on those parts wouldnt hurt either.

i like the message,i like the hooks,what really sold me on this song is your guitar playing,its fabulous.and a great tone,great sound.
this is usualy easily acheived by a guitar simulator like guitar rig or amplitude.
but you need the perfect match of guitar and preset,looks like you found a heavenly match here between the two.
im a sucker for the ccr,neil young sound,not to say thats what you sound like,i heard more telicaster boasting through.
which im a sucker for a tele all day long.

great writing,i could pick out all those little parts on guitar in there doing different things,which inturn means,the guitars were mixed well.

remember the opinion of chuckebaby is the sole opion of chuckebaby.

Charlie summed it up pretty well.  This is the proving ground where you learn how to make cool music.  The advise you get here is invaluable.

Daryl

Hey RobbyK!  I like this song!  very cool!  love the guitars!

I'd take that delay off the vocals, tho.  sounds really bad, IMO.  I bought that delay also, and used it on my song Christ is Alive as an echo effect, but not on the entire vocal cause it's too much.

good toe tapper!  thanks for sharing!

Hey good for you! (From one Robby to another?) I liked the bottom (on my buds, but they're good ones) There are some here who cry "Lord Lord!" But are not of the Lord... I really enjoyed your song Robby, good job sir. And a fine message too.
 
Peace, and I hope this helps those who are lost find it too.

Beagle


Hey RobbyK!  I like this song!  very cool!  love the guitars!

I'd take that delay off the vocals, tho.  sounds really bad, IMO.  I bought that delay also, and used it on my song Christ is Alive as an echo effect, but not on the entire vocal cause it's too much.

good toe tapper!  thanks for sharing!

Beagle, thanks for the advice, I am a huge fan of yours; it means a lot! I'll be reworking the song in X1, God willing...
 
Janet, Mike, Robby...your comments are sincerely appreciated! Blessings!

GREAT tune/performance.  I agree with the others when it comes to the verb/delay used on the vocals.  The vocals are also a smidge muddy compared to the rest of the mix.  All in all, a really well written catchy tune you have here.  KUDOS!


Kev