logan86
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The Heart Galaxy
Hi everyone. This is my latest track, it's still a work in progress. I really wanted to get some more opinions on it before I decide that it's finished. I get the feeling that it's still not quite there yet but I can't quite figure out why. Any opinions or advice really would be very much appreciated. Thanks guys http://soundcloud.com/use...alaxy-work-in-progress
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/16 13:13:01
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Nice 'chill-out' track, reminiscent of 'Sadness Pt 1' by Enigma. Sounds good as is to me.
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/16 14:23:09
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Pleasant drift thanks for sharing.
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logan86
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/16 15:30:04
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Yay thanks guys, I'm really glad that you liked it :D
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/16 18:06:11
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Nice start for something bigger. Could use some added instrumentation and vocals will bring it to the next level. Great start! Blessings, John
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/16 23:10:43
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Good mix! This will be a good song when it's finished. If you want it to be an instrumental, you need to shorten it a bit. If you want to add lyrics, then the length is OK. Perhaps, think about texture. Stay tuned.
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/16 23:17:38
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Nice, I have no problem with the length nor do I think it needs anything more. Well done.
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logan86
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/17 04:50:28
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Thank you everyone for your comments. I'm really glad that you all liked it. I definitely do want to add some vocals to this track. The way I see it, the piano bit won't have to repeat so often if the vocals could take it's place sometimes. Also I know a singer who really wants to work with me on this track so I will certainly try my hardest to make that work. Also I was thinking a bit about adding even more instruments, maybe make it all even bigger at the end, I'm not sure. Anyway thank you all for your feedback.
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/17 17:18:05
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 This would make some great music for the intro to a golf type computer game , very relaxing with some light energy added to the music . A winner , can't wait to hear the final music if this is a WIP . James -The Night Fox
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Re:The Heart Galaxy
2012/06/17 17:48:22
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agree with night fox comment if used in that light, nothing more needed.
you know...."select>tournament.......>single player>......golf course>...down,down,down...enter....>>>>loading....!!!!!!
To make it more interesting, some sparse vox is all that is needed and the track shortened.
Cian
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