Early demo - Beautiful world (rough)

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2012/06/16 17:13:46 (permalink)

Early demo - Beautiful world (rough)

  Hello everyone, I'm working through a myriad of demos, song fragments, ideas etc...for my next project, and this song caught my ear, I almost forgot about it completely. I know it's rough, but would love feedback on it, wondering if anyone digs it and should I pursue this track further. And if so, any ideas and thoughts etc. Don't hold back :) as I was still figuring stuff out then and realize it's a bit of a mess. http://www.soundclick.com...10048525&q=hi&newref=1 Lee
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    Re:Early demo - Beautiful world (rough) 2012/06/16 23:11:09 (permalink)
    I would pursue it. I would probably rethink the production, but its sounds like you have some interesting material to start with.

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    Re:Early demo - Beautiful world (rough) 2012/06/16 23:47:40 (permalink)
    What foxwolfen said.  This is the second song I've heard from you that is discordant, albeit creatively.  At some point, it might be useful to clean some of that production up, and make your lyrics decipherable.  You're not actually covering new ground here, and a little bit of this style goes a long way.

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    Re:Early demo - Beautiful world (rough) 2012/06/17 00:02:34 (permalink)
    +1

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    Re:Early demo - Beautiful world (rough) 2012/06/17 15:39:54 (permalink)
    Don't hold back :)
    Ok..it's not something I would listen to twice. There's the germ of an idea here, but presented like this it's impossible to comment on.

     
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    Re:Early demo - Beautiful world (rough) 2012/06/17 16:51:06 (permalink)
    Dylan would be proud of you for your attempt. As for me, I'm with James, not something I would listen to twice. Tis a germ of an idea, for sure, but you are the artist and know what you are looking for. I just can't get a handle on it myself, and for that I am sorry. Blessings, John

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    Re:Early demo - Beautiful world (rough) 2012/06/17 19:45:45 (permalink)
    thank for all the feedback...this probably won't ever amount to anything, I am working through a lot of demos, and for a hot second I liked this one, but on further listen...mmmm....we'll see. Appreciate everyone taking the time to listen! Lee
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