out to charm the world - the only boy in the world

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2012/06/19 13:40:34 (permalink)

out to charm the world - the only boy in the world

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    Lynn
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    Re:out to charm the world - the only boy in the world 2012/06/19 15:51:34 (permalink)
    First off, the song is interesting in a mellow rock kinda way.  Your use of reverb is subtle and about right for this vocal.  All the parts are adequately performed, but the mix is a bit off.  The vocal rides above the instruments too much, or else, the instruments need to come up a few degrees to blend better with the vocal.  I particularly would like to hear a little more bottom overall.  Have fun with this.

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    Re:out to charm the world - the only boy in the world 2012/06/21 23:10:42 (permalink)
    This song has potential. Musically its OK (though you gotta lose the fake harmonica), but lyrically its weak. Its like you have too few words for too many notes. I think I counted 4 glottal stops in one word ("part"). Also, you need to practice the song a lot more before you perform it. Its pitchy in places and that is due to practice and technique, not lack of ability.

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