new song - reworked it (silver and black)

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2012/06/28 22:44:59 (permalink)

new song - reworked it (silver and black)


edit:  Ok this has got out of control but I put many more hours into this one.  I hope someone enjoys it :)


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post edited by ATS - 2012/07/14 00:58:37

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    BenMMusTech
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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/29 00:14:43 (permalink)
    Hey Alex, this track has potential but the mix is a little all over the shop, the ladybug voice needs to be louder.

    Also the arangement is not doing the song any favours, there seems to be odd delay's on the drums and the end of the track seems to have some really discordant sounds.

    I accidently started to listen to the 2nd song liked that more.

    Like the concept but I don't think you pulled it off.

    Sorry Peace Ben

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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/29 07:31:33 (permalink)
    nice punchy mix sir

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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/29 12:31:51 (permalink)
    This is a  nice piece of electronica.  I don't hear the issues that Ben hears, but we all listen differently on different systems.  I did like the second song better, but that's because it has a vocal that I like.  I did like the mixes overall, but I kept hoping to hear something that made them stand out from the pack.  All in all, good job.

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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/29 14:03:58 (permalink)
    Nice piece of European electronica William, the panning lady voice gets a little repetitive I would personally vary that a little not so constant.

    In the zone, on the dance floor, I would expect this to work.

    Thanks for sharing.




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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/29 16:28:27 (permalink)
    Thanks for the great feedback you all!  I appreciate the bad feedback just as much as the good!

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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/30 08:06:42 (permalink)
    Not sure which song you want us to listen to as the one that started playing automatically wasn't Silver & Black. I stopped it and listened to S&B as that is the title you mentioned here. Not really my thing but mix sounds good.

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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/30 12:36:38 (permalink)
    Really good work. Found myself lost in thought while listening. Sounds really tight here.

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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/30 15:20:20 (permalink)
    paulo


    Not sure which song you want us to listen to as the one that started playing automatically wasn't Silver & Black. I stopped it and listened to S&B as that is the title you mentioned here. Not really my thing but mix sounds good.


    sorry about that, I fixed the link!

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    Re:new song - free hi rez download 2012/06/30 15:21:31 (permalink)
    foxwolfen


    Really good work. Found myself lost in thought while listening. Sounds really tight here.


    Thanks for the kind words!

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    Re:new song - reworked it (silver and black) 2012/07/01 05:08:56 (permalink)
    Sounds very good through my headphones Alex, nice mellow groove. Cool little details and melodies kept my interest throughout.

     
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    Re:new song - reworked it (silver and black) 2012/07/14 00:59:01 (permalink)
    totally updated the song again. 

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