michaelhanson
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By My Side- Up Dated
I wrote and originally recorded this song about 3 years ago. My equipment and recording skills were not as good as today. One of the vocal tracks last time had quite a bit of hiss in it. So....I have decided to give this song a little bit of and update and rework. I have used the original guitar tracks, but have redone the vocals. Let me know what you think of the mix. By My Side: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11733556
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Re:By My Side
2012/06/29 16:41:30
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Love the vocal and the vocal effect, drop the volume of the guitar a bit to let your voice be more upfront
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Re:By My Side
2012/06/29 18:03:56
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twisted6s Love the vocal and the vocal effect, drop the volume of the guitar a bit to let your voice be more upfront +1 Also find the frequency that the left guitar pick click is happening and give that a quick cut on the old eq.
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Re:By My Side
2012/06/29 19:28:52
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Hey Mike, this is nicely done. I agree with Tony and James, but those are small fixes. I did hear a flat note or two in the vocal that could easily be corrected with a pitch correction program, but nothing that is major. This is a fine song and worth a little extra time to get it just right.
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Re:By My Side
2012/06/30 10:57:58
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Twisted and James, thanks for the advice, I will drop the guitar levels just a tad and James I will take a listen to pick click as well. Lynne, I will need to give the vocals a listen again and see if I can pick out some of those spots....thanks for the kind words.
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Re:By My Side
2012/06/30 11:42:17
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This has a very nice overall sound to it, really rich and clear. There are a lot of pitchy spots in the vocal though, they really detract from what could be a good song.
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Re:By My Side
2012/06/30 12:41:48
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/01 03:47:26
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Hi, Mike, Really nice song with a cool retro 70's vibe! Well written, played and sung, and the mix sounds pretty close, with the few changes the guys mentioned above. Great work! Bob
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/01 21:58:51
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Hey Bob, Thanks for the listen. I started to work on this a little more this weekend, but family distractions got in the way. I hope to make some more tweeks next week.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/02 10:45:21
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Agree with the other guys on the guitar levels, Mike. Either bring them down or the voice up a bit. Remember...cool rule of thumb for you bro. We are always a bit reserved in vocal levels...especially when we're not crazy about our voice....and most of us feel this way. LOL! But what's worked for me is....always bring the vocal up +0.5 to 1.0 dB louder than you feel it should be. Like I think you'd be ok with a dB or so louder here. See, on your end, you know the words and what's coming next because you wrote it. We that aren't as familiar with the song, are hearing it all for the first time...so we're listening for it all. So keep that in mind and see if it helps you down the road. There will be times where that 1dB push may be too much...people will tell you about it, so don't worry. In time, you'll get the feel of knowing what the right level is. Just think about the first time listeners that don't know what's coming next if you can. If you have to struggle to hear something or question how audible something is, chances are we will hear it too. Think of this the same way with any solo instruments like guitars or sax etc. Anytime something is the focal point, let it shine and take the center stage with impact and authority....and until you can feel it and just know how much is enough, try a half a dB louder than you think it should be and see how it works. Nice job on the mix and the instrument prints. I like the sound of those acoustics and your voice printed really well too. It sounds like you're starting to lock in on this stuff...way to go brother. :) -Danny
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michaelhanson
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/02 13:58:31
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Danny, it always makes me smile when I get a song review from you. You have a way of making a person feel like they can really do this stuff. You also read me perfectly and your advice is spot on. I will follow this rule of thumb. Worked on some tweeks this morning, but heard a couple more small adjustments in the car this morning. I should have changes up in a couple of days.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/02 14:10:31
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Very nice tones on voice and guitars. A nice song in general. IMHO section: The big picture? The "feel" of the song is sad or wistful and I would expect joy and enthusiasm for the subject. You have a lovely tone in your singing but I also hear several out of tune spots in the vox. (use V-Vocal to check?) Sometimes it seems it's on one of the double tracks only, which emphasizes it.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/02 14:45:38
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Lovely acoustic work, massage the vox into place and you've got a really good song here Mike.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/02 19:31:43
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+1 to M_Glenn and Jonsey. I meant to mention the vocal pitchiness in my post Mike....but got a call in the middle of it and totally forgot to mention it. Sorry about that. I know you've been working really hard ont he vocal aspect and you're never totally happy with the vocals. I think this has some really good vocal parts in it, but there are definitely some pitchy parts as well that need some attention. I'd personally rather see you fix them without V-Vocal if you can...or, fix them with V-Vocal so it teaches you what is out so you can sing it the right way. Sometimes man....I'm positive I sing something right yet it still sounds strange. Sure enough, when I V-Vocal it, I can hear where my problem is and then it's easy to re-sing it if I choose to. So in this sense, you can use it as a teaching tool to help you with your pitch while singing. Something to think about. :) -Danny P.S. Fix it fast or pistolpete will get on here and totally rape you. LOL! :-Þ
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/03 03:01:20
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Sounds like the acoustic's being played with a 50 cent piece... I'm not saying that's good or bad... ...but what do you think?
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michaelhanson
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/03 09:32:20
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Hey Glen, Thanks for listening bro. On the feel, I understand what you are saying. I am not getting the "sad" feeling from the chords, I was getting more of a peaceful or melancholy feel; and I guess that is more what I was going for. Kind of an, "Everything is going to be OK", feel. Yes, I believe you were correct that it was one of my double tracks that was causing most of the issues. Hopefully I have fixed that.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/03 09:33:35
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Jonesy.... thanks for listening and the comments. I appreciate the kind words.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/03 09:36:17
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Danny, I was wondering if you were hearing the pitch issues as well. Thanks for taking the time to come back and add the additional comments. I took another stab at the back ground vocals or dubs and hopefully they are closer now. I lowered the instrumentation and I think the vocals are sitting at a better level.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/03 09:49:27
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montezuma, I appreciate the listen. Hmmm....50 cent peice.... I don't think I would do that to this rosewood instrument. The rhythmic strumming is a rosewood Larrivee model with a pick, a touch of delay or chorus and room dynamics. If I remember from 3 years ago, the room had hard wood floors and had a little bit of a bright ambience to it. If you are refering to the picking portion of the acoustic, I am just really digging in to the strings with a pick and it might give the tone a little more grit than soft picking the notes. I have always played with a little more of a blues feel to my picking. If I finger pick, I get a softer touch.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/06 13:54:11
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I have posted an updated version of this song; hopefully everything is sounding better. Follow the original link in the first post.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/06 14:09:17
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Hi, Mike, I still like this song, and it's getting better, but I still hear some notes that are out of tune in the lead vocal. They occur when you sing the words "by my side". Your voice is sliding from one note to another, but you're missing the pitch on the slide. Overall, your voice is fine for this song, so it would be worth it to nail those parts. The guitar clicking is still there, but it wouldn't be an issue if you took it down a notch. As I said earlier, these are minor tweaks, and the song deserves the best treatment you can give it. Hope this helps.
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/06 15:12:48
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I totally love this: 10/10, AS IS, both listens: Psychedelic magic blend here. Rhythmic Layer'd guitars are dreamy and powerful ... yet married to your dreamy and pristine vox (to my sensitive ears) ... Of course I respect Lynn's thoughts exceedingly ... but your vox sounds perfect to my morning ears. Guitar might beg a slight EQ dip at 2.5 to 3.5 kHz during 2nd and 3rd verse vocals. Otherwise, the co-dominant guitars might beg some (more) soft tape emulation ... to 'gently' smear the close-mic timbres ... else more ambient guitar reverb during the 2nd half of the song. I don't know. I suppose reverbing the guitars could deaden some of your excellent guitar delays and signature vibe. This feels orchestrally 'full' ... even without drums and bass! Utmost congrats on that! Do you mind sharing your spectacular vocal signal chain and fx's?
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Re:By My Side
2012/07/06 19:31:07
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Lynn, thanks for the feedback again. I will listen to that specific area again and see if I can hear what you are referencing. Mixing and editing your own vocals has to be one of the harder things to do in this industry. Seems like I can pick out imperfections in other peoples vocals so much easier than I can hear my own. Philip, thank you for the kind words my friend. I will look into that EQ dip on the guitar. Also I will play with just a touch of tape on the guitars. I beilieve that the guitars just have either a touch of chorus or delay on them. Here is the scoup on my vocal chain. Vocals are through an MXL 63M mic, through a Behringer Ultragain tube pre. The pre has 4 total tubes in it, if I remember right. I played around with the gain on the tubes for quite a while until I found the best setting to get some of the saturation from the tubes while still the cleanest signal I could. First effect in the chain is the Sonar vocal doubler, with the spread about 50%. Then I send it to a bus with the Sonitus Delay. The delay is ever so slight. I will expand more upon this in a minute. The last group of fx's is all Pro Channel. I am using the LA2A PC plug with both knobs around 50. Using the Pro Channel EQ, rolling off the lows and bosting some of the highs in the 4K-5K range. There are 2 vocal tracks on the verses, basically sung twice as a double track. The second vocal is lower in the mix, so that you can just barely hear it and it is panned about 30-35% to the right. In the chorus, I add another vocal track, basically tripple tracking the chorus. Loudness is blended to taste and panned to the left about and equil amount as the one to the right. More on the delay. I have been reading Mike Seniors book on Mixing and was intrigued by the section on reverbs vs delays. He mention that it is not uncommon for many pro engineers to us delay as a substitute for reverb because it is clearer or less muddy at times. He suggested to set up a delay on a bus so that it was ever so slight, so that it sounds more like a reverb than a delay. Then, basically send everything to this bus as a glue type reverb to help everything blend together. Hope that make sense.
post edited by MakeShift - 2012/07/06 19:40:07
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