Delicate Inside (MRI) {grungy demo}

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ABeautifulVirus
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2012/07/05 13:31:26 (permalink)

Delicate Inside (MRI) {grungy demo}

quick grungy sketch demo done in a day without Alan or Dan.  classic verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge/guitar-solo/chorus song structure.  simple methodical drum beat.  drums are actually acoustic drums played in one take with distortion and heavy gate on kick & snare.

http://soundcloud.com/abe...lvirus/delicate-inside

DELICATE INSIDE (demo)
© 2009-2012 MRI
Words & Music by Daren Thomas Turner


...for Zana
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You didn’t know that what you said
It made me wish that I were dead
It made me want to run away
All because of what you say

This time you hurt my feelings
This time you hurt my feelings
This time you hurt my feelings

You didn’t know that underneath
My insecurities are deep
And amplified with every breath
Of unkind utterance

This time you hurt my feelings
This time you hurt my feelings
This time you hurt my feelings

Will I survive the night?
Tomorrow is not here now…

This time you hurt my feelings
This time you hurt my feelings
This time you hurt my feelings
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Guitars, Vocals, Drums, Bass: Daren Thomas Turner


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    Lynn
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    Re:Delicate Inside (MRI) {grungy demo} 2012/07/05 14:58:46 (permalink)
    There's no need for me to repeat what I've said in the past about your music.  This time I could understand the lyrics without the lyric sheet which is good because I like the lyrics.  I'm not going to comment on the mix at this time, knowing that it's a demo, but I do like the song quite a bit.  You continue to show good song writing skills along with your own, unique style (even if it is slightly derivative of AIC).  The best thing I like about your submissions is your cool avatar.

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    Re:Delicate Inside (MRI) {grungy demo} 2012/07/08 16:00:11 (permalink)
    I'd like to hear a full demo of this done Cheap Trick style.
     
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