Who I am (hiphop, work in progress)

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illerrre
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2012/07/14 06:37:16 (permalink)

Who I am (hiphop, work in progress)

Working on a track and feedback would be greatly appreciated. Got my new mic yesterday and haven't spit in two years! Good to be back:)
So basically the only thing I do right now is the vocals and the lyrics. I've mixed this quick, but it's going to be mixed by people who know a lot more about mixing than I. Hence I would mainly appreciate comments about my vocals. Flow/presence/overall performance etc.

http://www.soundclick.com...ault.cfm?bandID=627513 (who I am2)
post edited by illerrre - 2012/07/14 06:41:09
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    whack
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    Re:Who I am (hiphop, work in progress) 2012/07/14 10:37:05 (permalink)
    refreshing for this forum, i liked this.

    Thought the keys took over the vox a bit on the verses.

    The strings give the chorus a nice lift.

    The beat dropout at around 3:00 was good since it broke the monotony of the percussion loop.

    You got good overall loudness here too.

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    Re:Who I am (hiphop, work in progress) 2012/07/14 11:13:49 (permalink)
    I would mainly appreciate comments about my vocals. Flow/presence/overall performance etc.

    I'm far from an expert in this genre but your vocal sounds right on the money to me.


    Cool tune.

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    Re:Who I am (hiphop, work in progress) 2012/07/14 14:14:19 (permalink)
    This is the third song I've listened to this morning that gave me a smile.  There are a lot of good things happening here, and one of the best is the tightness and definition of the bass frequencies.  Certainly, a key element in rap and hip hop.  The vocal was clear and easy to understand.  Cian has a point about the keys, but that is pretty minor in the overall production.  All in all, a good effort.

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    illerrre
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    Re:Who I am (hiphop, work in progress) 2012/07/15 11:46:51 (permalink)
    Will upload final mix to http://www.soundclick.com/illerill soon.
    post edited by illerrre - 2012/07/15 11:49:12
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    Re:Who I am (hiphop, work in progress) 2012/07/18 20:35:32 (permalink)
    Good to see you around these parts again, ill.

    Where did the song go?
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    Re:Who I am (hiphop, work in progress) 2012/07/19 18:44:19 (permalink)
      Thanks! Good to be back, and nice to be remembered:) Here's the track: http://www.soundclick.com...796081&songID=11768795
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    Re:Who I am (hiphop, work in progress) 2012/07/19 21:00:24 (permalink)
    Two thumbs up!

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