Hey Jason welcome to the community, thanks for sharing. Don't listen to deadbeat Pete he really is an arse who just wants to hurt people.
Ok the track is interesting but it needs to go somewhere, everything is all here. The playing is excellent, the mix is almost spot on. It has for me a little too much energy in the low-mids but meh thats just my subjective opinon.
Def you need something within the track to keep the listener interested would be my suggestion.
But as I say, it's all here, just needs to be refined.
Peace Ben