Hey Bop a Rebop, Rhubarb Pie

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2012/07/29 11:06:36 (permalink)

Hey Bop a Rebop, Rhubarb Pie

 
Greetings everyone,
 
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GT

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    Re:Hey Bop a Rebop, Rhubarb Pie 2012/07/29 12:03:52 (permalink)
    Wow, this tune certainly doesn't lack for creativity.  The arrangement is interesting in that you have various parts coming in and out of the song, as well as different textures.  Yet, some of the instrument choices seem to clash, for me.  The bell is OK, but loud enough in the mix that I was reaching for my volume know to turn it down.  The lead synth that follows doesn't quite fit, either, but that's merely my take on it.  Other opinions may vary.  Still, I think if you're interested in taking a second look at this, simply trying out some different  instruments could take this a long ways.  

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    Re:Hey Bop a Rebop, Rhubarb Pie 2012/07/30 08:11:22 (permalink)
    Lynn


    Wow, this tune certainly doesn't lack for creativity.  The arrangement is interesting in that you have various parts coming in and out of the song, as well as different textures.  Yet, some of the instrument choices seem to clash, for me.  The bell is OK, but loud enough in the mix that I was reaching for my volume know to turn it down.  The lead synth that follows doesn't quite fit, either, but that's merely my take on it.  Other opinions may vary.  Still, I think if you're interested in taking a second look at this, simply trying out some different  instruments could take this a long ways.  
    Hi Lynn,
     
    Thanks for taking the time to listen and thank you for your comments.
     
    You might also enjoy listening to Vivace.
     
    Regards,
     
    GT

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