groveendroad
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"All I Need Is your Photograph"
This a Re-mix with a new vocal of "All I Need Is your Photograph" I'm using Sonar X1. I wrote this song about my girl friend at the time. When I look back on it, it seems I saw her way to little. I ended up living over an hour away from her when I took a new job. Her picture helped me get through that time away. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=431867&content=music Cheers, Terry Wanted: Guitar player Bass Player Real Strings
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Lynn
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/15 10:43:53
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Hi, Terry, thanks for sharing that photograph. As always, you're distinctive vocal style is present, which matches your unique writing to perfection. I enjoy listening to your songs, and I will be replaying this a few times. Good job.
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groveendroad
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/15 20:09:21
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Lynn
Hi, Terry, thanks for sharing that photograph. As always, you're distinctive vocal style is present, which matches your unique writing to perfection. I enjoy listening to your songs, and I will be replaying this a few times. Good job.
Thanks lynn, I'm just trying to be as good as you!
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philz
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/15 20:35:46
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groveendroad
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/17 10:07:45
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philz
Very nicely done, Terry.
Thanks Phil, It's always nice to hear. I'm always trying to complete a song the best i can, but I get to thinking about getting to other songs at the same time. That makes me wonder if I should have tryed harder on the song I'm working on. So little time, right?
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notnat
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/17 22:28:41
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neat tune Terry... well crafted... I like the piano sound...
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drumstixkev
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/17 23:04:16
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Excellent lyrics! I really like the vocal delivery and the harmonies are tight. I guess if I had to nit I would bring the piano a smidge forward in the mix. GREAT JOB!
Kev
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ABull
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/18 13:38:20
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Nice sound -- vocal reminds me a little of Al Stewart :) My nit is that leading from the verse (or prechorus) into the chorus it would have a better feel if there was some percussion or instrumental lead-in to push it into the chorus. Also, liked the strings coming in after the bridge. Allan www.youtube.com/user/Kittibutt
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groveendroad
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/21 11:14:46
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Thanks allen, notnat and Kev. Thanks for your kind words.
Terry
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groveendroad
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/21 11:19:56
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I had some one on FaceBook tell me that he viewed the song as nothing more than a Demo. I must be fooling myself. looking for some help http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11677157 Terry
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markno999
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/21 19:03:58
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Terry,
Nice song. If you are looking for suggestions, I would add a Soft Pad on the first verse. This song has a nice retro 80's feel to it. A few percussion fills here and there would add a nice touch. Maybe a clave, some conga fills here and there. Not personally a fan of the strings in this song except for the bit starting at 3:34 time frame. I would use a Vintage Organ sound or a soft synth pad instead. Maybe brighten up the hi-hats and cymbals a wee bit. Quite enjoyable listen.
Regards
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Re:"All I Need Is your Photograph"
2012/11/21 22:14:46
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I love the tune. For some reason I found myself wondering what this would sound like with half-time drums. It wants to sound like a ballad but the drums are making it sound like it's had too much coffee or something. :) Maybe the 2nd time around it would work fine. I'm certainly no expert on drums. You might consider lowering the velocity on the piano track to give it a smoother feel too.
But overall, I really like this one!
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