IDK The Writings of Dylan Katen .... remix 2

Rick, this song is evolving, and a couple of things stood out to me.  One, the mix is more open which gives it some depth.  I'm still straining to hear the bass, but it's there.  The other thing is the lack of low mids which give warmth to a mix.  It seems somewhat brittle without the bottom end.  Maybe too much high pass filter?  However, I noticed that your vocal has a great deal of potential, and your voice would sound good in a number of different genres.  This is a darn good song, and I'm curious to hear how others perceive it.  Thanks for sharing.