Constructive criticism gratefully appreciated.

deadvader is pretty cool!  really nice transitions and mixing.  what synths were you using on it?? 

At first, I liked the tune but thought it a bit long.  After the second listen, I enjoyed the subtle build up of the texture, and I'm impressed that you created the drum tracks from Sonar content.  This has the potential to be the soundtrack for a video or movie segment.  You may want to think about the ending for this piece, but that's just a very minor nit.  All in all, well done.

@Lynn, thanks for the feedback I agree regarding the length of the Track It could probably do with a bit more variation in the later part, I will keep this in mind for future productions.

@ Swamptooth, The sonar content loops were cut up to obtain individual hits that I liked, then copied, pasted, processed and bounced into new loops and then arranged. Some hits such as the snare were layered from three different snares to form a single composite snare sound.