Pisstake Pop Song (Whoop Whoop Song)

Hi everyone,

Wrote a song for one of my friends a couple of years back and decided to give it an overhaul.
He's a funny fella, witty and we all kind  of take the piss out of him when it comes to women (or budgies as he calls em!)

Maybe a comment on the mix nd stuff to get other ears would be great, thanks.

Sugar Daddy Shock (The whoop-whoop song)

Cian

A great band from Europe/70s "Budgie"


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Budgie_(band)


I think your song is very creative, and the performances and recording are excellent.

Sounds great. Sounds just like a modern pop song. Very high production values. Good job.

Awesome!  It has everything, great high energy beat and melody. Performances and mix are top notch. I noticed you had over 100 played in a few short hours yesterday...somebody's listening. 
 You have the performance and production part of it mastered.

Shad man, big thanks. I'm confident my stuff could be easily taken as a base for radio pop songs and everyday I'm leaning closer to taking a real stab at this thing. Either going the songwriter publishing route or going play live with a band.

Cheers Robby, metal budgie band? counterintuitive?! thanks for your comment.

James, many happy returns. Glad it kept interest as this is v important as is energy, which is only something that has crept into my music of late.

Chandler, feels great to be compared to those type of song which is something I am trying to match all the time.

Scotty, thanks, and if I could find my third thumb, would show em right back at ya!

ohgrant, thanks a lot. great to hear those words. Yea I noticed how it got 100 views in a few hours, it stand to reason since most of my friends would only love to hear the song considering the person its written about, he's a real character. But certainly I've noticed a little more traffic on my soundcloud account lately.

Lynn, I'm chuffed, the day you say something bad about my song I'm packing it in!

Thanks everybody, means a lot, It means more that someone takes the time to listen to stuff cos we all know how much damn effort and how long it take sometimes to assemble a song together! Sometimes my songs can go unnoticed with my friends but at least in here people will usually listen and can appreciate the time that goes in.

Cian

no probs at all blipp, thanks for your honesty, dont like it ya dont like it, it aint no bob dylan but has its place.

and also cheers for the comments to give a little confidence.

Cian

teknotard, thanks for your comments and especially for your suggestions;

I have actually used parallel compression on the beat, I think as per James suggestion above, the snare needs a little more room. I yet have to fully master how to carve out the mid frequencies in a song to share them properly.

What do you suggest in the bass to make it "punch" more, Im guess there is some cutting required. I have it HPF to around 40hz at moment, I reckon somewhere around the low mid somewhere might take the mud out of it and then maybe boost the region that gives it some presence and attack??

Cian

Bitshen bass tone Cian.

All around fun.

All I can say is Wow! That mix oooooozes authority!

This is so well done! Wow!  :) Nice!

this is ACE bro!!!!! f'n gr8 :)

Well I'm an old f**t so I didn't make it to the end of the song Cian, but top marks for production - shining like a diamond!

Nice one Whack. Your productions are always well done & usually fun, this one is too! Sounds like it was fun.

:)

Great stuff - how did your mate feel about it?