First but not last song posting from me

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2013/01/03 19:41:54 (permalink)

First but not last song posting from me

Hey all, Firstly I'm new to this forum. Hope to use this forum as a way to get my music noticed as well as to learn from the threads of others. Here's my first finished song that I recorded on SONAR X2! broken-bones.bandcamp.com let me know what you think and I'm open to any suggestions.
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    THE NIGHT FOX
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/04 12:25:29 (permalink)
    I like the drum track and some of the other stuff going on but the mix didn't sound a good as it could be considering your using Sonar X2 .
    Sounds like your going in a postive direction , cheers welcome to the forum and Happy New year to you !

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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/04 12:28:02 (permalink)
    Link?

     
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/06 18:28:56 (permalink)
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/06 18:59:26 (permalink)
    Holy Crimson!  I love the interplay of the guitars and the drums in this high octane instrumental.  The mix sounds balanced and, the drums sound real and well balanced with the bass guitar.  FINE production!

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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/07 06:25:59 (permalink)
    Wow, what a great track! Love stuff like this, reminds me of Adrian Belew/KC. Wonderfully arranged guitars and drums..more please!

     
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/07 08:16:32 (permalink)


    The rhythm guitar isn't tight with the drums. 

    If someone's really into hard, precise music... this sounds really loose... and not on purpose like it's swinging etc.

    It seems like it's a composition about precise and exacting timing... but it's not precise and exact enough to express that concept.

    I think I'm having this reaction because it reminds me of a passage or a break from a song I used to listen to many years ago and the comparison leads me to the thoughts I mentioned above.


    I liked the overall concept and the approach of starting the song at full tilt.


    Good stuff.


    best regards,
    mike





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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/07 13:07:06 (permalink)
    Quite an interesting piece.

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/07 14:36:22 (permalink)
    Well this really hits the ground running doesn't it? Along with the King Crimson references this takes me back to my Gentle Giant and Van der Graaf Generator days. Thanks.
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/07 16:26:58 (permalink)
    This is very cool. Ignore the "thing" up there. It's plenty tight... unless you are trying to be a robot... which would make it suck.

    Looking forward to hearing more of your stuff. Cheers.
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/07 16:53:50 (permalink)
    It's frantic, frenetic, with great sweet back and forth between the guitar and drums, I love it!
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/08 15:40:54 (permalink)
    Amazing. I loved it. Brilliant interplay between guitars. Reminded me of some of the stuff from the british post-punk era. I think vocals would work great with this track. Wonderfull from start to finish. No crits on anything. Well done.
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    Re:First but not last song posting from me 2013/01/08 16:26:36 (permalink)
    That woke me up!  Good stuff.  Great guitar work! :) 
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