Ballad

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2013/03/11 00:00:59 (permalink)

Ballad

OK guys I have an assignment to write a ballad song for my music class. tell me what you guys think ? As he walk into the woods He sees a man half alive He tries to save him if he could He doesn't panic and has no shrive This old man hanging from a tree He has a hero trying to set him free If only he can open his eyes and see That sucide is the worst degree The hero is fighting or his life This man lucky he was there He cries for help and for a knife But he's in the middle of no where He keeps him in the air For the police came to the rescue This poor man's life has been spare And he is finally in refuge A nice trip into the forest Became a rescue mission For a poor man in need for nourish As the hero made the right decision
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    drma173
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    Re:Ballad 2013/03/11 22:03:32 (permalink)
    please guys i need atleast one post its for school.
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    Re:Ballad 2013/03/11 22:04:38 (permalink)
    Tony, there's no link.

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    Re:Ballad 2013/03/12 11:02:58 (permalink)
     
    If I remember correctly you are a rap artist (or hip-hop, or whatever you kids are calling it these days LOL)
     
    There is no link to a song but perhaps you just need to re-affirm the lyrics.
     
    Apparently a younger man goes for a walk in the woods and stumbles accross an old man who was trying to hang himself from a tree. The younger man called the police. Since he didn't have a knife to cut the rope he held the old man in the air to release the tension until the police arrived. The police arrived and the old man was saved because of the younger man's actions, which made him a hero.
     
    It's a bit dark as a lot of rap music is. I think you brought the message through in a creative way. You might want to start the song by explaining why the younger man was walking into the woods in the first place as it is only explained at the end that he was having a nice trip into the forest. Perhaps he was also depressed/confused and went for a walk in search of answers. By making this heroic act of saving the old man's life he received his answers and realized that it was old man who is the actual hero of the story because he started the chain of events that lead to his own answers to life.

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