Warrenlee
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jonboper
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/24 08:18:29
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I dig. Sweet vocal delivery, reminds me of Kurt Cobain singing Cat Power (sorry for the comparison...just can't think of a better way to say it). The change into the chorus is excellent. Don't know if you're looking for suggestions, but I think if you take the low note out of the second verse chord, at least sometimes, it'll give the progression an even more minimalistic and stark feel. Would love to hear some percussion on the second verse, maybe a bass with a loping, awkward line, but not to make the song bigger, just to cement the starkness.
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/24 12:59:59
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That's a nice clean recording. Good song. Sometimes simple is better, Lee.
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Warrenlee
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/24 16:30:40
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thank gentlemen...appreciate you taking the time to listen and the kind words. And Jon, yeah, bass will be added and I'll play some "unplugged" style drums on this for the finished project. Thanks again! Lee
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Lynn
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/26 11:47:59
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Lee, this is in regards to both of the songs you have on the forum. As usual, the sparseness of your music makes your songs all the more intimate. I've grown to like your style of music and your unique voice. I no longer compare you to Dylan, but think you have your own thing going, which I find refreshing. I hope to hear your full collection of songs in the future, because that's another challenge in itself. Well done.
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Warrenlee
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/26 16:04:36
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 Hey Lynn, These are the last of the demos, I promise! Thanks for all of your kind words, very much appreciated. I am now beginning the next phase of mixing and mastering and laying down drum tracks to the 15 songs I've chosen. I will definitely share them when finished Lee
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Voda La Void
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/26 21:45:37
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Sounds like a good foundation, I was really missing some build up, or progression and development of a string section or something. It will be interesting to hear what you do with it.
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/27 08:11:04
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Sounds good for guitar and vocal. I had trouble understanding the words. But it's 7 AM so it may be on my end.
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Warrenlee
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/27 08:42:43
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Hey Voda, strings are on the table with this, good call
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/27 11:16:55
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Lee, Very nice and simple guitar and singing piece. Very relaxing and enjoyable to listen to and sooths the mind. Nice work.
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/27 12:03:35
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Nice song Lee. Presenting a song like this leaves nothing to hide behind, and you carried it off well.
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Warrenlee
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Re:Lean heavy
2013/03/28 10:23:57
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thank you gentlemen, very much apprediate the feedback!
Lee
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