Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FINISHED with a NEW STORY

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Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FINISHED with a NEW STORY

I just wanted to post this and get an ear check!  Comments, complaints, suggestions welcome.  But on the mix only.  composition is set.

Thanks for your time!!

LAST UNMASTERED MIX (MP3) 3/31/2013 @ 4:21PM  
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12245425

FINISHED MIX: 4/4/14 (WAV)
https://soundcloud.com/al...lice-sweet-alice-m-i-a
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    UltimateMusicSnob
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/28 22:59:34 (permalink)
    Great song! My ear always goes to the singer--can't get enough of a good singer, and this is a good one.

    My ear hears a lot of mid-high freq energy in the mix, which is shared between the rhythm guitar and the singer, especially at about 1:00+.

    Have you tried sidechaining a compressor to duck the guitar, just slightly, when the singer's voice is present?

    To get even trickier, you could try coupling a slight freq cut in the guitar in the singer's band--about 1200-2400 Hz--to whenever the singer's voice is present.

    These are only slight differences I'm talking about, just enough to clear a little freq space around a singer's voice that I really want to hear.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/28 23:20:21 (permalink)
    good song, though it appears to be missing some of the beef in the mix, the low end.
    its a little thin, im guessing maybe 100k-500k
    this is broad but id like to hear some lower end in it.

    the mix itself is good, all instruments are very well balanced,nice job.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 00:23:46 (permalink)
    I agree, this is a very nicely put together song and the singing just brings it full circle. Nice instrumentals and a great voice really make this stand out front. I really enjoyed this and it had my attention all the way through.  Peace be with you. Blessings, John

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 06:39:45 (permalink)
    Sounds very good. Really liked the bass and guitar together. Enjoyed it a lot.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 08:47:59 (permalink)
    Good stuff!!  I may need to adjust my sub slightly, it sounds pretty good here in the low end.  That's one of those things that in the past I killed most of my mixes with, low frequency MUD. ;)  I run my bass in parallel - a DI and a mic'd cabinet which has killer beef.  It may be just a matter of pulling that up just a tad.

    I know what you mean about the guitar and voice fighting.  I'll notch out that frequency (and/or do a sweep) and see if that helps.  

    THANK YOU ALL!!!  I'll post another mix in a bit.  Cheers!!
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 08:55:08 (permalink)
    Liked the music and the vocals are great. At times the vocals and the music reminded me of Natalie Merchant (10,000 maniacs)

    Like others have said, the mix is good, but lacks some lower frequencie oomph.

    Enjoyed this.

    Nice work indeed.
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 09:51:09 (permalink)
    OK, back from dropping the "chitlins" off at school.  Lemme dive in....


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 10:49:55 (permalink)
    I, too, love the song and the vocalist.  I agree that there's some low end missing in this mix, and near the end of the song, the vocal is competing with other instruments for attention.  This could be fix with automation envelops.  All in all, good job.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 11:15:41 (permalink)
    Thank you!

    What I did for the low end was (in addition to tweaking my sub slightly), was pull my bass cabinet up in the mix, and I also brought up the kick a little bit and adjusted the tom mix.

    I notched the guitar in the ~3000K range after a sweep which found that was the most competitive area (they're bussed so that was easy), and I pulled the female vocals slightly up in the choruses and the end of the song.

    Give it a shot, and thanks again!!    So happy you all like the song.  It will be the first single from our new album.
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 13:46:32 (permalink)
    Sounds great to me; adjustments just right. I tried it on three different sets, earbuds, PC desktop (cheap), and the nice ones with subwoofer.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 14:01:21 (permalink)
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    Sounds great to me; adjustments just right. I tried it on three different sets, earbuds, PC desktop (cheap), and the nice ones with subwoofer.

    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Thank you for taking the time.  It really means a lot!!


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 14:10:32 (permalink)
    Just so you know, now that I've done the listen for our purposes here, the chorus of your song appears to be my 'earworm' for today--a good sign for a planned single...

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 14:45:35 (permalink)
    ^^^^ hah hah!!  Success!!  THANK YOU!


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 15:44:57 (permalink)
    Good song, nice singer still a little thin at my end.

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 17:58:54 (permalink)
    +1 on the low end thinness; guessing it is somewhere in the 125-175hz range that can use the beef

    I struggled to hear your singer during the verses when she is in her lower register. Add a nice vocal compressor on her and yo'll be set.


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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/29 21:39:11 (permalink)
    Huh.  Well, I'm going to hold off on adding any more, it's sounding pretty good here - I'll wait to hear what my mastering guy says before I add some more "salt" to the mix.

    Thanks for the time, both of you!


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE 2013/03/30 11:34:24 (permalink)
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    +1 on the low end thinness; guessing it is somewhere in the 125-175hz range that can use the beef

    I struggled to hear your singer during the verses when she is in her lower register. Add a nice vocal compressor on her and yo'll be set.

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    What do you use for a "nice vocal compressor".  I seem to be inundated with options! LOL.
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/03/31 14:42:45 (permalink)
      Nothing wrong with this mix whatsoever in my opinion. WOW!! This sounds so real where audio goes. So many times people try and use effects to change their sounds when they don't realize that the thing that sounds the best is right in front of them, meaning themselves and their music. I thought this sounded raw and real and really great!! Loved the tune, I also thought your band was really tight on playing the music. Great mix in my opinion, it was RAW and REAL!!! Perfect IMO. Bobby
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/03/31 17:21:41 (permalink)
    OK!!  I decided to focus on the low end, because I realized my sub's connector was playing games.  I also adjusted my crossover.

    What I did was go to my submix and increased about 130Hz down just slightly as James suggested. I also added a compressor to her vocal and did a little enveloping on the volume.  I think it stands out better.

    I think it sounds way better.  Let me know what you think!!! Thank you ALL for your help!

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/03/31 20:09:00 (permalink)
    Great work, I can hear the singer just fine, and there's plenty of bass on my monitors, anyway.

    Perhaps a REALLY experienced engineer might have some clever tricks for "perceived bass" as opposed to meter bass--one of the ways they get songs to sound good on lesser speakers--but that level of expertise is beyond me.
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/03/31 20:14:58 (permalink)
    ^^^ Thank you so much!!  I think we're there!!  I'll await a few more.  I can't tell you how much I appreciate your time and testing my mix out on your monitors.  


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/03/31 21:03:56 (permalink)
     Mix sounds great here. Really cool tune, great vocals

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/04/01 13:27:34 (permalink)
    Thank you ohgrant!! :)


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/04/01 13:45:55 (permalink)
    Yea, great song and nicely mixed.  A few niggles as above - and yea, home girl Natlie Merchant is a peg.  I didn't hear the earlier versions, but early in the song the vocals might come up a hair since it floats just under the guitar.  Lows in the drums might come up some to make them a tad punchier sounding and it does sound kinda light, but works w/ her voice.  More pop than rock.  But again, that is all niggles and doesn't stop a great mix and song.  Really enjoyed it.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/04/01 15:05:00 (permalink)
    Thanks AT!  I already fixed the low end situation so I think especially now I'm going to wait for my mastering engineer to weigh in.  I just heard from him (he's in Israel), so I'll let everyone hear the finished product when he's done.  I hate to add too much low end, especially since it's a pop/rock song.


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/04/01 21:48:23 (permalink)
    Had a bit of problem trying to get to the top link, but I got to it.

    The low end sounds perfect here so I'm guessing I'm at the correct version. Fairly clean and balanced.  Had to turn it up a bit to check out the guitar , I wasn't sure if it was overly distorted intentionally or if it was clipping.  Sounds like it was recorded correctly. listening again.... I think it's the combination of electric piano and distorted guitar at times are adding together to cause what I was hearing. I love those electiric piano tones they add a nice spice to the mix perhaps making them a little more subtle would be more effective. I hope these anomalies are just coming from my setup. Anyone else notice this. It's not overly obvious but caught me off guard at the volume level I was listening. 

    Nice Vocals, great guitar playing love the drums and overall mix is very nice not to mention the well placed bass.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/04/04 02:38:30 (permalink)
    Thank you Tap!  Well, I had it mastered and this is the most recent version now that I've uploaded to our Soundcloud.  

    https://soundcloud.com/al...lice-sweet-alice-m-i-a

    I learned a VERY IMPORTANT LESSON today.  MP3's really DO suck.  As an experiment, have a listen to this mastered WAV, and then another listen to the MP3 to see what I mean.  We had this song played on our local alternative commercial FM station last night, and I was shocked to hear it in my car.  I had sent them a 192kbps MP3, and that's what you all have been listening to.  I'm amazed at how horrible it sounded.

    So learn from my mistake!  I called the program director, to find out if he had addded any processing, because like TAP I heard distortion with the guitars, pumping artifacts and it sounded like clipping.  He was like: "well we use Adobe Audition and then WideOrbit to add the songs to our system": and they are slightly compressed there.

    I sent over the WAV to ask him to listen and see if there was a difference, and he was like: WOW - just send me WAV's from now on!!!  (My mastering engineer also recommended I send a minimum of 320kbps).

    So anyway, do yourself a favor and conduct my little experiment!  Don't have a  heart attack like me! LOL! 


     

     
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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/04/05 22:32:42 (permalink)
    Congratulations on the radio play!

    Radio stations do add their own compression--one reason is to stay in FCC compliance for signal strength, but I suspect some also do it to insure that their commercials jump in loudness up from the actual music program.

    Couldn't agree more on MP3's. The storage compressionMP3 uses (completely different from audio compression) throws away frequency bands it decides you wouldn't hear anyway (it's wrong, imo), so additional audio compression after the MP3 is decoded at playback time changes the material, in unintended ways. 

    Would they accept 96 kHz 24-bit WAV's? If they do , that's what I'd send, give them the best they're willing to accept.

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    Re:Alice Sweet Alice - First Single from New Album - FRESH EARS PLEASE - NEW MIX UP! 2013/04/10 03:57:29 (permalink)
    I never make an mastering mp3 anything smaller than 320, theres no need to unless it going on an ipod.
    watch out for program directors too, ive had them give my mixes to interns practicing with sound forge or audition.
    you call them back and ask them what was that ? and they try feeding you some lame excuse's on frequency modulation theory.
     
    always send a wave, always upload a wav unless you can only upload an mp3.
     
    sounds good.
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