Nevermind..................

DANG Bobby did they just lay my eggs I was going to eat today ! LOL

Nice guitar playing !
James

Bobby, Chicken soup, Wow!! Great guitar work and everything else fits the song good. The vox need a touch of something, sounds off key in spots (not that I'm a great singer myself), but other than that sounds great. Rock on!! Nice jamm.

Peace be with you. Blessings, John

I have to agree with Philz on the brilliance of the guitar, but the  vocal is close, but no cigar.  I think, though, that it's a simple fix with pitch correction software.    Your voice, itself, sounds fine for this song, but it's just a phrase or two away from perfection.  It's worth looking into.

philz


Good tune, Bobby, and your guitar playing is awesome as always.  Now, if we could just get your vocals to be 1/2 as good as your guitar work, you'd be home free.  From what I could hear, it sounds like you've got a pretty good voice, but your singing well off pitch.  I wish I could give you some easy tip to correct that, but I just don't know what that might be.  All I can say is good for you for putting it out there, and keep on trying... maybe look into getting a vocal coach, assuming you really want to sing.  All this strictly intended as friendly advice.

Great guitar playing!  Just few spots on your vocals needs tuning.  Just a suggestion: have tried some screaming?   The snare of the drum is a bit flat.  It needs more pop.  You can fix that by using the transient shaper and increasing the attack.

 Something tells me I'm going to regret this, but my honest review. Never was anything wrong with your guitar work and some nice work here. Since the project is lost I'll skip the mix.
 The vocals are the big thing here and probably the most subjective. There is some off key notes but overall there are parts that you seem more confident and in those parts I hear a diamond in the rough.
 I'm not suggesting you do this over but if you were to put the project back together and made a karaoke track and practiced that a few times and be absolutely certain of every note you want to sing. You could nail that and knock it out of the park.

I can't thank everyone enough for the kind comments!!

 I lost the master tracks to this mix in a hard drive crash sadly, But I kept this mix down on another drive and that's what you are hearing.

Although I do plan to re-record the whole song entirely and honestly believe I can do so much better hopefully. 

I have been asked about the "Echo Vocal Thing" I used in this. What I did was us the Pocket Plugins Freeware VST called "Ping Pong" for that part. Just thought I'd mention that for those wondering. 


James - LOL!! Yeah, the Chicken clucking thing was just me being a bit bored at the time, an attention getting type of thing you might say, just for fun actually.  Thanks for listening. 


Blipp - Thanks man, Thanks for listening!! I ain't no singer, I'm working on it though. I may not ever make it there but I ain't scared to try. Thanks again!!

theguitarplayer - Thanks for listening John!! I'm working on it, lot's of changes in store in hopefully many better ways in the near future.  Thanks again!!

Philz - Thank you for listening!! I'm going to re-record this, hopefully with a better sound. Honestly I know I can do better. We shall see. Thanks again. 

Lynn - Thanks for listening!! I lost the master tracks for this one in a hard drive crash. I dunno what it is, maybe it's the way software writes to the hard drive while recording but since I have been recording music using the PC I have had a few hard drive crashes. Never had that problem until I started recording music on the PC. Thanks for listening. 

Guitarhacker - Thank you Herb!! Something you said to me a while back helped me more so than anything anyone has ever told me on vocals. You said : "A lot of rock songs have the vocals kinda quiet and buried in the mix". I dunno if you remember that or not but THANK YOU!! It has helped me tremendously on things as of late. Nobody likes a loud mouth on vox I guess ya know. Thanks again!! 

vechung - Thanks for listening and the screaming suggestion. I scream all the time at my mixes, but I still haven't gotten a reply just yet, I'm hoping though. LOL, Just kidding of course. 

Evadianpug - COOL!!! Thanks!!!!! What's up bro??? Great to hear from ya man!! Yeah I got the Email, sent ya back a few things. The Pugtones are AWESOME!!!!!!!!! Always great to hear from ya and thanks for listening!!

ohgrant - Thank you Grant,  I was a train wreck with so many problems last time I was on here. I've got most of them worked out. I'm not the same person I was. I am finally back to the real me is about all I should be saying right now for my own benefit. Thanks for the kind comments!! And thanks for listening!! And thanks for the Advice, I am going to re-record this tune, hopefully it will work out better and your advice will make it even better. 

Tap - Thanks for listening!! Tap, I thought you were a professional singer? Now I am confused. LOL!! I'm just kidding dude, LOL!! I think I can do better on the vox. I have this bad habit of taking the time to get things just the way I want them to and then maybe making one or two takes on the vocals. I have a weak voice and don't practice singing, although like I have always said I just add vocals to show where the words go. 

Thanks to all who have replied!! Thanks for listening!!

Bobby

Serious Noize!

chuckebaby - Thanks man, I am going to re-record this one, it's not one of those I can recover since my last hard drive crash. I think I can do better though. We shall see, I ain't afraid to try either way, maybe better or may not be. BTW: I have a few friends I wanna work with on this one so it may turn out really good. 

Thanks again!!

Bobby

Most things have been said Bobby. nothing's changed since I last commented on one of your songs - you have some cool riffs and songs, let down by sloppy production. i don't mind your vocals, you have a decent tone to your voice, and i like how you have produced that, actually, in fact it's more the drums i don't like - just the sound. but a very very good song.