Reworking a few tunes

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2013/04/10 23:09:36 (permalink)

Reworking a few tunes

I haven't really been too active with writing. So I figured while waiting for a good song idea I'd tweek a few oldies.

You may remember Footsteps in the Hall.

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New vocal track recorded in 2 takes. I did it this morning first thing and I like it the best of all the vocal stylings I have attempted on this song in past sessions. It worked pretty effortlessly and very little editor was used to "fix" it. So it's about 97% untouched.

I also have Jamstix 3.xxx on the drums

I decided to play the piano part....so that's me playing... yup.... I enjoyed it quite a bit. 

Of course, the Taylor and the mandolin is also me playing. Damn I love the mandolin!!!!

Everything else is likely not me playing. I think..... 


anyway....enjoy!

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    The Band19
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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/10 23:25:24 (permalink)
    I have so many that need re-mixing, like "all of them that I did the mix on?" :-) 

    I can hear you enjoying that Mando :-D It's a fun instrument isn't it? I love the mandolin...

    I think I remember this tune? I do like this remix very much. It reminds me of one of my favorite bands "of all time" A bluegrass band called "The Seldom Scene" A group I've seen live probably 3 dozen times? This feels like one of their songs. 

    I like it. If I could change anything, I would change the word memories to mamories? :-) (they light the corners of my mind?) Mix sounds great to me.

    In fact? Here's the song (by the Seldom Scene) that it reminded me of;
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Dj9yyHyvZ0 

    Please note, this is high praise? At one point I had every one of their albums (20+) And I learned to play the violin/fiddle playing their music on my record player.

    If I was in charge? If I were king of the Forrest?



    I may pull the fiddle down a weence? And push the bass by an equal amount... And I may take some of the highs off of that snare? And I may pull the hats down just a bit? But "**DISCLAIMER**" Any mix advise I give may be hosed. I just call um the way I see um? Too many balls these days? Wish I could see more strikes.

    So while my disclaimer stands? Remember this you must (in the words of Yoda...) Smarter than you the forum is?(Mmmm?) Wise are you to remember this...
    post edited by The Band19 - 2013/04/11 00:16:25

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/10 23:31:53 (permalink)
            It's a bit loud on the mix. Other than that is sound freaking great Herb!! Vocals were spot on. The Clarity was superb!! 

    It is really loud, I've been doing that myself lately. Just thought I'd mention it. 

    Great song and mix!!

    Bobby

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/11 01:26:30 (permalink)
    The remix sounds good to me. Not much on country music, but this sounds really nice. Very nice playing all around.

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/11 09:54:39 (permalink)
    That's a great song Herb... Mix sounds good, but the Hihat sounds a little too out front to me... everything else is very nice to my ears... Well done Herb... 
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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/11 11:25:55 (permalink)
    Robby: Thanks... high praise indeed to be compared to Seldom Scene.... great bunch of musicians

    Bobby: This mix may be loud but it's not compressed. See the screen shot of the wave. 

    John: thanks for the listen

    Frank: I had a listen again this morning and fixed a few nits with it. 

    Fixes and tweeks:

    I pulled the EQ down a bit on the high end of the drum track and lowered the overall level a few db.

    I added some "EQ brightener" to the piano and then needed to pull it down a bit.  The piano BTW is the Cakewalk Sound center Concert Grand #1

    I edited a few of the "I've" places with envelopes to loose the 3 spiky places and the wave looks better now.... 



    post edited by Guitarhacker - 2013/04/11 11:27:22

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/11 12:16:55 (permalink)
    So now you're a keys player too?  Between you and Robby, I'll be out of a job soon!  

    This is real nice...Good job on the keys for sure.  And I agree...nice vocals.  :) 
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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/11 17:43:51 (permalink)
    Herb, you've done a super job on this song.  I use Jamstix, too, and I like the way you mixed it.  The performances are solid all the way around.  Well done!

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/11 20:05:40 (permalink)
    I'm with you when it comes to loving the mandolin.  Sounds great on my end, Herb. I really like the slower tempo IMO it fits the mood/vibe of the song better.  Super job on writing the lyrics.
    If I had nit-pick the mix . . . I would bring the verb/delay down a smidge on the lead vocals during the verse of the song. They sound great during the chorus but a bit heavy on the verses. KUDOS!


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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 07:57:08 (permalink)


    Real nice song.

    I love the slow but sure vibe.

    The singing is very nice!

    The harmonies you go with on the fiddle seem just right.

    best regards,
    mike




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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 08:08:42 (permalink)
    Janet: I tried to be tasteful on the piano not just slamming keys.... I enjoyed doing the piano. I should do this more. 

    Lynn:  Rayzoon sent me JS3 for free so I decided to check it out and really like it. I have another tune I'm using it on. 

    Kev: Thanks, Pat and I really worked on the lyrics to this ..... much appreciated. There's always gonna be nits.... I'm busy for the following 6 days so it won't get looked at for a while..... I will listen to the song and look for what you mentioned. 

    Mike: thanks.... each time I have recorded this, it has been different. I think this is somewhere around version 4.... the very first was simple guitar/acoustic.....it's taken some time to get here. 

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 09:36:37 (permalink)
     Yea, real cool tune Herb, new vocal track is very nicely performed and captured. I really enjoy the other instruments you've added, mandolin and expressive fiddle sound sweet. I almost forgot you were the one to recommend Jamstix a few years back in the Guitar Tracks days. Still one of my favorite tools.

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 10:25:44 (permalink)
    Grant.... thanks.  I had stopped using JS for a while as I was trying some new tools. I have started to us it again.  As I stated above they sent me JS3 for free and it sat on my hard drive for quite some time before I decided to install it and take it out for a test drive. 

    That Mandolin was a great investment for $80.... my wife rolled her eyes and made a snide comment about bluegrass music under her breath when I showed it to her for the first time the day I bought it. Anyway, I really like it. 

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 11:45:15 (permalink)
    Beautiful song.. nice arrangement  and sounds.. 


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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 14:41:35 (permalink)
    Herb,
     
    Really fine song.. nice job on the piano and mando too.  It is easy to overplay either of those instruments, particularly if not your primary instrument,  but I think you got it just right.    Sounds great.
     
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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 20:32:00 (permalink)
    Very nice remix. The only thing that stands out to me is that the piano does not sound like it is in the same room as everything else. Might just be me though...

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 20:35:36 (permalink)
        I'm not complaining Herb, I hope you don't think that, I apologize if I come across that way. I thought it sounded great honestly. 

    You've helped me a lot in the past and I can't thank you enough for your help on various things with recording.

    I didn't say loud was a bad thing, I just said it was loud. Great tune, and like I said the clarity was great!!

    Excellent!!

    Bobby

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/12 21:47:39 (permalink)
    Schweeeeeeet!

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/15 08:25:13 (permalink)
    Sorry I haven't replied.... I was out of town for the weekend ..... down in Dallas (Beagle's town I think... or is it Fort Worth?) for my daughter's wedding shower hosted by our new in laws.... got to meet the family and extended friends and relatives and had a good time albeit a short and busy one.

    Makke: thank you for the fine words. 

    Markno999: I agree, and I do tend to overplay, but on this one I forced myself to play with a "less is more" mind set. 

    Dan:  I have a nice ride this morning to the job.... so I will listen with those thoughts in mind. 

    Bobby: We're good bro... no problem. 

    Scott: Thanks...... 

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/15 08:57:11 (permalink)
    Nice (updated) track, Herb! Mix, Composition and Arrangement were well done! Add me to the: "Likes the Mandolin part" as well!

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/15 20:20:40 (permalink)
    Thanks Rus.... 

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/15 21:42:12 (permalink)
    Herb - you sound like Chris Christopherson on that one. That a really nice country tune - traditional country - not the new stuff. Great.

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    Re:Reworking a few tunes 2013/04/16 08:02:55 (permalink)
    Thanks Mark..... that's the first time I've been told I sound like Chris...

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