Original_Deadly Waters_Remastered

Makes me want to smoke things 

kev with all the1's, smoke what you like. Thanks for listening.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Hi John, nice one , very cinematic soundscape, well done.
 
 Rik

John, this almost sounds as if it could have been inspired by "Electric Ladyland".  I like it as is, and it helps to make you a quintessential electronic musician.

 
I say that in a good way.

Lynn, WOW!!! What a compliment, thank you. But, I don't know if I am a example for others, but what I am is a person that loves God and tries to do His will in presenting music with messages, giving glory unto Him. I can only thank Him for giving me many wonderful gifts in my life, to share His message with others, in the hopes they will understand His love for all mankind. Thanks for listening. I liked the "Electric Ladyland" concept, and I did get a good chuckle from that idea. I can see where you were coming from with that in mind. Hendrix has always been a favorite of mine.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Geno, Again, Thank you for listening and for the nice comments, they are much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed how I put this one together.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Daryl, Thanks for the listen and the comments, they are much appreciated and glad you waited for everything to build.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

sven450, Thanks for the listen and for your comments, they are much appreciated. Yes, the trippy waves were for taking you on a ride at 600 miles an hour across the ocean. Glad you enjoyed this one.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Thank you all for your comments and for listening to this old tune I did back in 2007-2008.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

I listened again? I'm sorry, I hope you can accept being criticized? It's really not good man... It sounds like some jamimng over an ambient backing track. The drums are not with the music, there is basically no music? Music involves "a melody" There should be a chord progression? And the bass and drums should support this. There should be less "or no" sound effects in the background. The lead should either be melodic, or should support the chords in "the song?" But there seems to be no song? Just wind, and rain sounds, and a chord or two with some jaming over the top. It may be good to rip a bong load to? But as far as a song goes? Or guitar playing? I'm sorry, it's not good. And I mean no disrespect, even though you may take it that way. It's really just one of the only honest opinions you'll get. 
 
Listen to my latest post, there's a melody? There are words? The guitar goes "with the melody?" Take notes.
 
Or I could say?
 
Trippy, but focused enough to be very listenable (WTF!!??)
I understood the feel you were going for much better after I read what it was written about or based on. (Music is about more than the feel sir...)
Cool. A tad too long getting started for me, but then developed nicely. (translation, I didn't like it)
 
But trust me when I say "all of that is BS." People will blow smoke, "most people will blow smoke?" Do you want smoke? I can blow smoke? You don't want smoke...
 
Here, I can blow smoke like these morons...
 
It hat a certain "je ne sais quoi" which was difficult to describe? It took me back to a summer in Spain where I rode horses through the mountains in the spring? There was a smell of fresh berries and pine cones. The playing reminded me of topless girls on the beaches of Martinique... "etc, etc, blah blah blah..." Read? People who are being nice, "are being nice." But it was Trippy, but focused enough to be very listenable...
 
Music is typically somewhat "formulaic" for a reason. It involves a 1, a 4, and a 5, and sometimes a 2m. Or some variation thereof? I know of what I speak... I know how it works, I understand the math (which is what it is). There's a formula to all good music, all good leads, all good rhythms... It's math. Relative majors and minors? Triads? 7ths, 9ths, etc... It's math. But this tune is not math.