munmun
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You are the most beautiful girl in the world
A song I posted a while back. I struggled with the mix so I have tried again. Any thoughts welcome. http://snd.sc/1hGK9fT
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/11 13:34:29
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Nice chorus - very catchy. Well done otherwise. A bit of a sibilance problem and t's - you might be hitting the vocal compression a bit much. Very retro sounding - in a good way.
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dcumpian
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/11 19:24:23
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I like it. I hear a few minor timing problems, but nothing major. Vocals sound very clear, but I'd suggest treating the harmonies just a bit to push them back a tad.
Nice job!
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/11 21:44:49
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/11 22:48:25
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Ok this tune is driving me nuts...
To start I love it.
Mix is really neat and the elements you brought in definitely have that vintage vibe.
I want to hate the rhythm section because it is so loose.
But its like a big sloppy dog, you have to love it.
May be just yank the leash a little if you follow me. ;)
George
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munmun
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/12 08:35:22
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Hahaha! Big sloppy dog! I like that. Well now with new supercool melodyne in sonar x3 maybe I could tighten the leash a tad. Cheers.
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/14 15:36:51
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I like it! Sounds like a recent Bond theme crossed with some later Beatles records, and given a pop song production treatment.
The rhythms are a little off here and there, but it's not fatal. Also, I think the background vox (particularly when you sing "and I love you") have a bit too much chorus on them, but that's personal taste. I love the rhythm guitar sound (tremolo/reverb).
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/14 15:57:08
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Hey Sunny.
If Robert Smith (from the Cure) and Paul McCartney (from the Beatles - just in case you weren't sure) had a baby - this is what it would look like. Very cool sir
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Re: You are the most beautiful girl in the world
2013/10/14 21:13:20
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Interesting to say the least. I just can't put my finger on it, but something's not fitting in well somewhere. I'm sure you will figure it out.
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