need mix critique

Not too bad, I had a quick listen through the laptop speaker and it came through really well, then I switched to my beyer headphones and its pretty spot on.  Everything comes through nicely.
 
Ben

I was thinking it was a bit bass heavy. But sometimes I think i lose my perspective. that is why I ask for critiques.  thanks guys!  :)
 
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I agree. I asked a few friends to critique also. Since they are friends, I wonder if they are just being nice sometimes. I appreciate the forum folks who take the time to listen. I was thinking the tune was bass heavy, but it sounds differrent on differrent systems. I am thinking at this point I will probably take the bass down a tiny bit. but I will do that another day when my ears are fresh.... and I have enough coffee... :)

Great song, really liked it. Good singing too. Mix sounds good, but to my taste could have used less compression. Especially for a song like this, it would be nice to have more dynamics which get a bit lost right now. I know you'll give up a bit of loudness, but, I think that's a fair trade-off. 

I will give a tentative perspective though it should be noted that my furry ears have apparently been telling porkies to me of late if I read thing correctly.
 
As noted by Bob very 70's - 80' vibe throughout, the mix appears to translate well here in my control room on my Events.  Perhaps a little squished but that can be very personal.
 
Thanks for sharing.

TraceyStudios
Does squished mean too much compression ?

You cannot make 2 consecutive posts within such short amount of time.

Yes

Thanks for listening Lynn.

I would have to agree with Walt on the snare and cymbals. But, like he said, that could be a matter of taste. Overall it sounds pretty balanced, although you could pan a few things out to ad a bit of width to the over all project. Vocals sound good except for the very beginning IMO. Nice song though.
 
Peace and Blessings, John