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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/12 17:34:05
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Great vocal work. Sometimes the simple things in life are the best. If you want some feedback on this song, I thought the guitar could use just a little treatment, it was a little too clean. But maybe that's what you were after.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/12 17:51:56
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Well sung Tony. The guitar sounds really good/well recorded. This is exceptional and the mix is like fine chocolate... My only change if I could make one would be to pull those background vox down just a touch, or maybe just have a master vocal bus where you send the lead and back-up and limit all of it and send it to the mains, this is how I usually tackle it when I have something with the lead and several backing tracks. It's easier for me than trying to ride the faders. i.e., LV to the Voc master, BV to the BV Bus, treat and pan as needed, send to the Voc master, send all instruments to the instrument master, and send both of those sub masters to the mains. Then you can compress and limit the two sub-masters, and then apply the finishing touches on the mains. No one told me to do this, it's just something I came up with through trial and error. However, there are many ways to skin the cat ;-) And you're a pretty good cat skinner ;-) Much better than me and most!
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/12 19:45:37
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This is a very exquisite tune with a sublime melody and chord progression. It's beautifully understated which only adds to its charm. It's good to go.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/12 20:02:20
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Yeah, This is good stuff! Nice song and an even better vocal.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/12 22:15:05
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Yeah Tony! Nothing but the best from you! I love the chords on the guitar. What a vibe. The best part is you left me wanting more at the end!!!
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/13 15:36:03
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That aught to get you some Tony 
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/14 03:56:08
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Fantastic. 
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/15 08:36:34
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nice work Tony. Loved this..... especially the unusual chord progression you chose.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/15 14:57:19
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Ace vocals as ever. Now you need to do the UK remix - fourteen two !
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/15 15:09:02
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/17 13:45:43
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Sweet
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/17 13:58:11
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really nice..
love the vocal approach
reminds me of a cross between prince, gay and mayfield
nice blending on the harmonies
it's a good capture of the acoustic as well....
nice fat bass tone, i'd almost bring that level up a bit on it.
i like that one minor chord in the bottom of the chorus turnaround......
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/17 19:58:35
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Nice one Tony.
You could sing the phone book and it would sound awesome.
Love the changes on this. And, how you followed melodically with the voc. Heard some melodyne helping out a little I think:)
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/17 22:07:14
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Always a joy to listen to. Nice song.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/02/22 10:15:26
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/05 13:07:08
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Thank you all for taking the time to listen
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/05 16:58:46
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excellent Tony
One of my favourite ever tracks is 'Crazy You' by Prince and this has the same vibe
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/05 19:18:51
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The harmonies were nice. The vocals were very crisp. However at times the guitar seemed a bit out of sync them.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/05 21:39:46
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I like the jazz-ish feel to this number. Interesting chord combo's that you have got going. Excellent vocals -- they certainly express the emotions of the lyrics. BTW the lyrics are very good also. Harmonies really round everything out.
Nice one!!!
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/06 23:11:57
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Great song and KILLER vocal!!
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/07 03:42:21
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Hey, Tony, Phenomenal job on this soulful ballad! Spectacular vocals as always, great writing and arranging, and the mix sounds warm and has that very intimate "in the room" feel. Excellent work, bro, you never disappoint. Have a good one, my friend! Bob
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/19 18:37:29
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I'm tryin' my friends Thank you.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/22 09:11:16
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hi iam randomly listening to tracks to get my score up to 25
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the good news is ..i have been listening to other peoples work..
love yours
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/24 09:01:13
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beautiful voice ... as ever, perhaps a countermelody on flute towards the end to drift off into the 2.14 distance, or not to taste, good job!
Best Wishes.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/28 16:34:58
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Again, thank you my friends for taking the time to listen
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/29 08:06:48
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Hi Tony, excellnt as Always. Nice tune too.
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Re: "Two Fourteen"
2014/03/29 22:14:04
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Superbly sung. Got the prince vibe going on in this one. :)
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