wizard71
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Mix critique
Hi Guys n Gals, Would like some opinions on this mix please. Any EQ suggestions welcome. Its a pretty chilled out song i guess. I have also attempted (lamely i expect :)... ) to do a quick mastering job. :/ https://soundcloud.com/space-time-aces/its-the-day (newer version) Thanks for your time as always Bibs
post edited by wizard71 - 2014/07/08 19:10:24
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/04 08:34:48
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While I am certainly no expert, I think this sounds quite good. Bass is very well behaved, and the vocals have centerstage. I hear some mouth noises between a few phrases that you could gate out if you wanted, but they aren't that distracting.
Really like the song as well, well done.
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wizard71
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/04 14:55:37
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Ah thanks Dan, didn't even notice them, oops!
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/04 15:15:13
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Immediately like the melody and vocals. Great song and simple arrangement. Harmonies are nice. I hear some Beach Boys and Pink Floyd in it. For the mix, all is good. The overall EQ could be improved with tweeking some highs. Please do an A/B comparison to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l71pbhqnvNM&feature=kp You may hear some clarity in the top end that could help your mastering. Love your work. Rimshot
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wizard71
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/04 15:48:28
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Thanks Rimshot, I love that beach boys song and can certainly hear the sheen that the vocals have compared to mine. How to achieve it is the question. :)
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/04 15:59:03
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wizard71
How to achieve it is the question. :)
Try killing (highpss) somewhere around ~300HZ on the vox buss.
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/04 16:00:45
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Seems to me there is often a a lack of bass guitar on the 3 with the kick during the verses.
Personal preference I'm sure.
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wizard71
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/04 16:29:02
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wizard71
How to achieve it is the question. :)
Try killing (highpss) somewhere around ~300HZ on the vox buss.
I had it highpassed to 180, 300 seems to really clear things up, thanks. :) re the bass, I can only afford to pay myself for one note every bar in the verses. i spent most of the budget on the middle 8 ;)
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/05 01:43:06
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Listening through headphones, I hear that the music coming out for the left speaker to be louder than the right, If you could get the balance there then I feel this would sound even more awesome than it already does :)
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/07 14:26:37
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I like it... I definitely hear some classic era Floyd in there, and perhaps a bit of Flying Colors. And the harmonies are very nice.
I do agree with Gus though - musically the mix seems a bit focused on the left.
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/08 14:01:26
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The link in OP does not work. Found it another way.
Sounds well here, I guess I am listening to a finalised mix?
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Mix critique
2014/07/08 19:17:05
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Thanks for listening Wookiee, I have now updated the link in the original post, thanks for pointing it out.
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