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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/18 17:57:10
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Very good for a first mix. Nice song.
The bass is a bit to loud and hiding the bass drum. It's hard to tell about the guitars because of the bass but I suspect their fine. Nice vox!
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Sixfinger
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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/19 09:42:52
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Thanks, yeah it's always the bottom end I have trouble with. I believe you :)
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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/19 20:58:40
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yeah, I can't hear the kick for the bass. I like the panned guitars. drums overall need some more work. help them to cut through the mix. give that snare some snap.
good work so far
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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/20 08:18:21
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Good song, nice guitars - good job!
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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/20 08:56:29
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As noted the bass is dominating the bottom end, perhaps a little surgical EQ in the bass to give the kick some space, it also helps to add a little emphasis in the slap part of the kick just to give some definition. Having said all the song has potential just need to do a little tweaking with fresh ears. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/21 21:39:10
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Thanks for the comments and input... soon as my ears get a rest from the weekend gigs I'll give it another go and take it up a notch ( or is that down regarding the bass )....
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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/23 14:48:40
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I agree that getting the bass reigned in would be first stop. But I think some of the vocal lines here and there might be a bit rushed, particularly in the first half. Then again, there are a lot of lyrics to fit in some spots.  Good song!
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Sixfinger
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Re: New Song, first mix... I Don't Mind If You Stay a Little Longer
2014/09/24 13:37:09
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I think you're right Steve, but I have to admit I was at first happy I got them words in with any intelligibility lol.
I got sidetracked with some paid sessions (yay) so this one is on hold for just a bit.
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