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2015/01/17 13:12:11 (permalink)

hi there new song

i would appreciate any coments,feedback and advices on this one
 
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post edited by martin s - 2015/01/17 13:19:26

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    bapu
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/17 13:23:11 (permalink)
    Cool bass tone.
     
    Center guitar is fighting with the vocal. Maybe pan it to the left?
     
    Nice song even if I do not understand the lyrics.
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    martin s
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/17 13:29:40 (permalink)
    thx bapu
     
    i will aply your advices
     
    really thx for your coment & compliment
     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/17 13:49:34 (permalink)
    Good stuff.
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/17 14:00:15 (permalink)
    thx KaKKu

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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/17 20:02:42 (permalink)
    very interesting....like the way you mixed things up
     
     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/17 20:33:47 (permalink)
    Tres bien! You could bring bass and percussion up a notch. Cool song and vibe.
     

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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/17 23:29:22 (permalink)
    "We are all Charlie Hebdo..." It speaks loudly when our French brothers in arms stand up more firmly than do we "Spineless Americans." I thought this was pretty good. 
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/18 04:46:18 (permalink)
    thx the pogue

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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/18 04:48:08 (permalink)
    thx for your advices rimshot
     

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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/18 07:42:33 (permalink)
    thx all for your advice,compliments ect !!
     
    cheer
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/18 11:35:01 (permalink)
    Sounds good here, like Ed the guitar is fighting with the Vox thanks for sharing.

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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/18 11:45:02 (permalink)
    hi there wookie thx for listening i take your advice.coments
     
    cheer
     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/18 16:14:41 (permalink)
    Bonjour Martin. J'aime.
     
    The bass and percussion need to be centered - the panning loses impact,
     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/18 17:58:32 (permalink)
    merci Daryl
     
    i will make the change (adjust)what you advice me to do
    thx for listening!!!
     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/19 23:39:46 (permalink)
    Tres Cool! No, I don't speak French. I'd get into some volume automation (drop the guitars a little while the vocals are on) and some panning.
     
    Your link seems to cut off right when the big drums are coming in . . . darn it!
     
    nice vibe!
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/20 08:03:11 (permalink)
    thx for listen & for your advices it's appreciate
     
     
     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/20 13:59:35 (permalink)
    That's a good song, reminds me of The Alarm, nice rousing, anthemic hook, and cool guitar work.

     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/20 17:50:54 (permalink)
    The shakers at the beginning sound slightly distorted. Not sure if it is the mp3 conversion or in your mix. Agree that the panning on the bass and guitars should be reversed. Bring the vocals up a notch as well. Cool tune!
     
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    Re: hi there new song 2015/01/20 18:20:33 (permalink)
    hi Dan i take all note & advices ,,
     
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