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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 10:52:22
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It sounds quite raw here, quite open, I think the vocal could do with some additional support in the form of harmonies or other backing vocal, but as I do not do signing I probably not best placed to speak about that.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 10:57:59
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ok i take note thx for listning
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 11:28:12
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It might not hurt to double track the vocal. Just a thought. Like John (Wookie) said, some harmonies could help. Interesting tune but a bit muddy through my phones. Nice start on an interesting song.
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 11:46:13
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thx dude advices are welcome
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 13:16:45
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Very nice song. I think the vocals and bass could be a bit louder.
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 14:06:27
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good kakku i will listen more closely
thx dude
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 14:41:31
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Like the arpeggiated electric guitar riff, and the acoustic guitar behind it, good combo!
Vocals up please! And, if you are eq'ing the bass, you might try adding a bump up around 500-600 hz, to help it cut through with some treble fingery bits. Did you roll off your guitars below say 200 hz? it might lessen a little mud down yonder.
great laid-back feel to the tune, very nice!
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 15:24:27
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thx Tom for your compliments & advices i take notes of all what you said thx again
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 15:52:54
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I think his vox sound good i this they just too far away try to make them more dry. easy on the reverb
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Re: listen my song please
2015/02/01 15:57:08
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im on it i take the advices thx i will post the new mix soon..
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