Bit- I didn't think it was unbalanced; the guitar was in both channels. The right channel was just delayed some. Maybe you have better ears than me. I'm close to finishing a new mix. This time, I put an effect on the right side guitar, so that should accentuate the difference. The vocal seems just a bit too up front to me. I'm thinking of backing it off just a little and eqing it. Please let me know what you think when I post it. Thanks.
 
James- Thanks. The bass is all MIDI.

Pug- Thanks. You're too kind. As soon as I had the chords down and decided to add a vocal, I immediately knew that I wanted a "Paul Simon meets Roger Waters" casual, almost talking style. I'm happy with the way it turned out, too.
 
I had to Google Astrud. The name sounded familiar but I couldn't place it. Always loved "The Girl..." Really showing our age, now!
 
Doug

I didn't hear the earlier mixes, but I am liking this! The guitar sounds fine to me...nothing wrong with panning hard L/R ...you still hear it in mono and you gain depth which was the goal. Not much more I can add to what's already been added. Nice ! I like the light feel this song has to it...the vox sits well  and is well done!

Yeah, much better IMHO.   The bass really adds a lot for me, completing the song and propelling it forward.   I like it.    And for me, it also allows the vocals to sit better with the rhythm.