"Defenders of Totem"

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2015/04/08 13:04:41 (permalink)

"Defenders of Totem"

https://soundcloud.com/davewesleyrecordings/defenders-of-totem
 
Energetic, brassy, yet somewhat light and fun.
Looking for any sort of critique or comments!!! What do you think of this track?
 
post edited by davdud101 - 2015/04/09 16:49:47

 
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    Re: "Defenders of Totem" 2015/04/09 21:48:55 (permalink)
    Very nice arrangement, Dave.  It's well paced and leaves me wanting more.  Was that a flugelhorn sample in places?
    This could be good background materiel for a film or video.  Nice one.

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    Re: "Defenders of Totem" 2015/04/10 01:46:32 (permalink)
    Superbly arranged. Very nice performances and sounds happening. Agree with Lynn, this composition could be well suited for music placement in film/movies and such.
     
    At time: 47-48 the guitar lead seemed to fumble a little, and overall sounded somewhat detached from the mix (needed more presence) to bring into perspective / balance with the other instruments. This is just a minor criticism, therefore its your call.
     
     
     

     
     
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    Re: "Defenders of Totem" 2015/04/10 05:05:16 (permalink)
    Fun - I could see this in an anime movie. It felt like a hero theme. Mix wise it sounded pretty darn together. I appreciated your horn section harmony part. 
     
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    Re: "Defenders of Totem" 2015/04/10 11:44:15 (permalink)
    It sounds OK here for me the kick sounds a little lifeless, but if that is what you wanted, I can see the inspiration behind it.  Thanks for sharing.

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    Re: "Defenders of Totem" 2015/04/10 16:15:05 (permalink)
    Lynn, thank you for listening! but I'm curious- where did you hear the flugel? Maybe it was a high trombone?
     
    SongCraft, as you can see, I'm no guitarist  I sort of do just fumble around on the strings and I felt a solo would fit well there. I probably should've edited it to perfection. Glad you like it though!
     
    Thanks for listening, Tom, that's just what I was going for. The 'brass soli' was actually my attempt to draw from my strong big band/swing influences, and it came off pretty decent, I think.
     
    Glad you checked it out, Wookiee, and strangely I think the kick became a "set and forget" parameter that was packaged in the drumkit I chose  It served its purpose for me though- not boomy or heavy, but light to give the accents. Thanks to you.
     
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    post edited by davdud101 - 2015/04/13 16:41:12

     
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    Re: "Defenders of Totem" 2015/04/13 13:50:55 (permalink)
    Composition and arrangement-wise, I think you pretty much nailed the style.   
     

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