Wow!  Big improvement in my opinion!  The bass is no longer competing with the kick (on my system anyway).  I keep waiting for the song to take off and "Let It Fly" with a driving snare drum at some point but it never does (for instance at 2:20 or so).  Instead the sidestick plays throughout...
 
Keep up the great progress on this one Lynn!

This does sound better nice touches all round Lynn.

This makes me wanna do some buck dancing! Improvements sound really good. I would still like to hear the vocal a tad more , you have strain a little bit to hear it when the right and left guitars are riffing away. I like it though .makes me feet move.

Monty and Ed, thanks for the input!  I made the changes you suggested, and I think they definitely helped.

Definitely improved. Love it when both guitars come in, its a very catchy song. Well done!

Ed, thanks for taking another listen!  I probably can push that guitar up a notch.  I actually wrote the song around this riff while I was demoing the new guitar, so it deserves its place in the sun.
 
Greg, thanks for your time and input.  I had a lot of fun doing this song, and I'm glad you appreciate it.
 
Mike, it's good to hear from you.  Thanks for your kind words and time.  I hope the mix pans out for you if you happen to hear it on something else.  I did briefly monitor it on buds during one of my mixing sessions.

Thank you, Gus, for your input.  I actually have a few drops of verb on the guitars for a touch of depth, but maybe I'm standing in the shallow end of the pool ;)  I'll experiment with a bit more verb on the next pass.

The new guitar sounds great Lynn...you're going to think I'm crazy..and you might be right, but I think you sound a lot like Davide Lee Roth...I think you could be a stand in for a Van Halen cover band. Great vocals. The production is well done I think. Most minor nits and ops have already been covered.
Great song! Nice!

I thought I replied here! I listened a few days ago, Lynn, and meant to say:
Very cool tune! really unique, while still keeping a strong 'pop' attraction (at least for me!), a good combination of strongly defined styles.
More like this is good!!

Dave, thanks for listening and your kind words.   Much appreciated.
 
Mark, I used to like Big Country quite a bit, but I had forgotten them.  Thanks for the comparison.  And, I am loving my new guitar.

The background voice are so on point. Good job man

Late to the party here, but... Love this percussion! Song sounds like The Kinks -- that's a big compliment. That guitar figure seems too busy to be present all the way through like that, especially behind the vocal and with the hyperactive drums. It's a good riff, but I would switch to something less frenetic during the singing, and just bring it out when there's a space for it. Sorry, I know you have a new guitar.

Hmmm...   I dunno, this could be my favorite yet from you, Lynn.       Catchy melodies, nice punchy and balanced mix, cool arrangement. Love the effect on the vocals on the chorus line tails.   Oh, and the three chord walk-downs are phat.
 
I think I like progressive hard rock hoe-downs!
 

PRS...nice gift! I like this song too. Lots of cool twists and turns. I especially like the bridge/chorus section. Your voice sounds great on this song as well. Good work. Thanks for posting. 

Lynn
 I'm loving that PRS!  Don't tell anybody this, but this is the first guitar with humbucking pickups that I ever owned.  

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