Take two of Seven of Four

HEY WOOKIE!
 
i like the melodies and ideas,
but the drum track......
 
i hear an african or morrocan 'drone' beat here,
no 'ones' and 'fours', but a churning, 
mellow but driving rhythm, using ANYTHING except a rock drum kit.
 
i don't know if you have anything in your bag of furry tricks,
maybe some loops,
something,
but if you were to put in a nice polyrhythmic syncopated kind of beat,
and add some ambient noise (maybe wookie hollers), i think that would dial this in.
 
 

Very furry, furball.  The drums have a nice, solid sound but I would like to hear something like Rob (Batsbreath) is talking about, just for fun  Like programming drums is fun!.   This tune has some nice movement to it.  You know what I was hearing while listening (in my little mind) was a nice choral part.  There is a drone underneath that kinda sounds like choral but is one of your synths.  Ha, I just rolled of the chair.  I am laughing at myself giving ideas that I can't even explain.  Well, it's nice, John.  Now lick your paws and get back to work.

What I like most about this style is the optimism that comes out of it. The progression change adds some "struggle" but the piece ends on a positive note. It reminds me of Owl City. With or without lyrics it could also be a children's song or an accompaniment to a film segment. Nice.

My thanks Dena appreciate you time to take a listen and comment. 
 
Cheers Phil yeah I know, bad lazy Wookiee it is back on the DAW though a little different percussive take, who knows what might happen now.

Well that was 4 min of fun. A good start, nice and clean, uplifting, happy go lucky. I also felt it needed to have some other developing interests - tho I have a bad habit of over working a piece. Perhaps a build up, then back to simple sort of thing?

Anybody who writes something in 7 should be congratulated and thanked - I listened twice and liked it better the more I heard it. It's upbeat and futuristic. I too wanted development or an arc of simple/complex/simple or something, but it's fun as it stands. Very inventive, furball!
 
cheers,
-Tom

Seven is my lucky number Wookster.
I agree with Lynn - this really gets going around the 2.30 mark and that nice subtle warm hanging pad that pops in and out does it's thing

Thanks for sharing
(everyone else has offered enough advice mine would be useless)

V2.0 Is Mo Better.

I like this even more than the first time I heard it.  You have a very fine touch for arrangement and combining textures.  Well done, Wookie!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

So... which galaxy did you have in mind when you did this?   Just curious.   
 
As someone who likes odd meters, naturally I liked it (preferred the 2nd version).   It's got that "space" sound, whatever that means in synth terms, and it works.   Really interesting piece, Mr. W.    I liked the synth "trumpets" at around the 3:00 mark.  Nice use of delay. 
 

Just managed to listen to both versions Wookiee... I always enjoy listening to your compositions 
 
Made me realise that I need to catch up on your Soundcloud page.........
 
cheers
 
andy

You have been extremely busy up there... catching up is going to take some time, more than one sitting hahaha 

Thanks Roger, yeah took a little time till I was happy with the basic groove, appreciate the listen and comment.