Eleanor Rigby-remixed and remastered-and now added some electronic noise

Ok I've finally got around to starting my remixing and remastering prokject...basically going through the archives and fixing everything.  I've learnt a lot over the last 15 years of being an engineer and producer...none more than in the last few months.
 
This track, which was completed in 2011 is a cover of Eleanor Rigby.  I used Notion 3 for all the strings, which was transcribed from The Complete Beatles Scores, I've gone back and placed the main vox not so far on the right...which was a complaint from listeners last time.  I've also cleaned up the mix...quite a lot.  Alice is on vocals.
 
Ben
Edit...I've gone back and added some electronic noises to help fill the track...and slowed it down with varispeed
https://thedigitalpoet55.wordpress.com/2015/06/09/eleanor-rigby-5/
 

synkrotron
Hi Ben,
 
I never heard the previous mix, but those vocals still sound a bit too far to the right. Or it may be that they just need to come down in volume slightly.
 
Take my comment with a pinch of salt because I'm no expert... I'm simply expressing my thoughts as a listener 
 
And this may be your desired effect, in which case, nice cover 
 
cheers
 
andy

Thanks for listening, it's a preference thing...the original is like that...but thanks for commenting.
 
Ben

synkrotron

BenMMusTech
the original is like that...

Ah! Right... I never realised that. I've just listened to it on my headphones.
 
Thanks for pointing that out 

All good I've actually just gone and panned it a little bit here and there as per your instruction and dipped the highs...just.
 
Ben

I kinda like this, Ben.  I admire all those who walk on cherished ground.  I like her voice, and the way you created your own arrangement without mangling it.  I hear the strings as being dissonant, but in a way that fits the mood of the song.  I'll listen a few more times and let this settle in, but good first impression.